New Family
well, My name is Adrian Arturo and I come up to here for sharing about my new family I met two weekends ago, therefore I want to say I am only child for mother's side, but now I've met three half-brothers and my real father after 31 years, I have to recognize I felt awkward the first times with them so it wasn´t until the second meeting I felt comfortable, we sharing our numbers phone and there more , I have two little pretty nieces.
I love English and its culture and people, so if you want to share with me whatever you want, I will be there for you guys
sincerely
Adrian Arturo
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New Family
well, My name is Adrian Arturo and I come up to here for sharing about my new family I CAME UP HERE TO SHARE NEWS ABOUT MY NEW FAMILY THAT I met two weekends ago,. therefore FIRST OFF I want to say THAT I am AN only child for ON MY mother's side, but now I've met three half-brothers and my real father after 31 years. I have to recognize I felt awkward the first times TIME with them so it wasn´t until the second meeting THAT I felt comfortable, we sharing SHARED our numbers phone PHONE NUMBERS and there more WHAT'S MORE, I NOW ALSO have two little pretty PRETTY LITTLE nieces.I love English and its culture and people, so if you want to share with me whatever you want, I will be there for you guys
Sincerely
Adrian Arturo
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New Family
well, My name is Adrian Arturo and I come up to here for sharing would like to share about my new family which I met two weekends weeks ago. therefore I want to say I am the only child for on my mother's side, but now I've met three half-brothers and my real father after 31 years. I have to recognize say that I felt awkward the first times with meeting them so - it wasn't until the second meeting I felt comfortable, and we sharing shared our phone numbers phone and there What's more, I now have two little pretty little nieces.I love English and its culture and people, so if you want to share with me whatever you want, I will be there for you guys
Sincerely
Adrian Arturo
Well done! Make sure to end sentences with a period, and to not have a "run-on sentence." The phrase "little pretty nieces" will sound awkward to an English speaker: "pretty little nieces" is normal - possibly because of nothing more than cultural norms.
Good luck to you and your new family!
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