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Essay about Poverty (+CorrectMePlz) Poverty is not a lake of character, It's a lake of money, a lake of opportunity, a lake of investment, it's when society turns it's back and makes you invisible. Poverty is a lack of shelter, is being sick and not able to see a doctor, not able to go to school, poverty is not having a job, it is a lake of freedom. Poverty was and still is the biggest and the serious killer in the word, there are many various cause and result behind poverty such as blockaded, economic crises, unemployment rate and government load policies, this causes are connected together that's means to say if we have economic crises we have unemployment, we have not employees, and we have not occupations . As we mentioned above there is many causes behind poverty there is many result behind it, such as diseases, little food no school, infection, no skills to work no energy and criminality is always the result of Poverty. So poverty is stands obstacles in our way process and we must cooperate to prevent this problem.

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Essay about Poverty (+CorrectMePlz)

Poverty is not a lakelack of character, It's a lakelack of money, a lakelack of opportunity, a lakelack of investment, it's when society turns it'sits (it's = it is [the apostrophe shows where the two words have been shortened and joined together and replaces the letter that is missing]; its = belongs to it) back and makes you invisible.
Poverty is a lack of shelter. It is being sick and not able to see a doctor, not able to go to school, poverty is not having a job, it is a lakelack of freedom.
Poverty was and still is the biggest and the most serious killer in the word, there are many various causes and result behind consequences of poverty such as blockadeds, economic crises, high unemployment rates and government load policies, thisese causes are connected together that'swhich means to say that if we have economic crises we have unemployment, we don't have not employees, and we don't have not occupations .
As we I mentioned above, there is are many causes behind of poverty and it has many consequences there is many result behind it , such as diseases, little food, no school, infections, no skills to work, no energy and criminality is always the result of Poverty.
So poverty is stands as an obstacles in our way process and we must cooperate to prevent this problem.


Interesting essay Mohammed :)

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