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Just my scribble Well, first of all, I wanted to say about TED. Actually, that photo, which is attached to my scribble, is a screenshot from one of the videos from TED. If you don’t know what to do with your life or are disappointed with the fact that the world is no more interesting for you, check out TED channel on Youtube. To tell the truth, they have several channels. The one, where they upload only videos with youngsters, the one with their special lessons, and they even have one with only videos for women (some of them made me cry, by the way). With the help of one video I’ve learnt how to draw within 15 minutes. There are a lot of videos and articles which promise you that you will have that or this skill after reading/watching but in the end you should work hard anyway. But that video! I can really draw now! I was doing everything what the man from video asked to do and then I shown my drawings to sister and she asked me if I had taken some drawing course in the Internet. I can give you link if you are interested, just write me a message, because it is really worth watching! The only thing that unite all these various videos is that they have idea worth spreading, something that draw people’s attention, you can learn something new from every video. And, hmm, it is not an advertisement, they haven’t paid me for these words, I just like to share with people priceless information :) And here’s the idea of one video. Here’s 8 traits of successful people. Everyone wants to be successful. It doesn’t matter what our occupation is and it doesn’t matter if we are 18 or 42. Everyone wants to be successful but not everyone knows the answer to the question: how to become successful? And that man (by the way, you can even see him in the picture) interviewed a lot of successful people: artists, journalists, pop stars, directors, women and men. It was a huge work and finally he has distingushed these 8 traits. I want to speak about myself a little bit in this entry (it is my account, right? :D) , and I want to discuss every trait and what role it plays in my life and give you some of my tips. Well, after such intoduction I don’t have characters anymore: D I think I will dedicate the whole entry to each trait since I have very good ideas for all of them and also since I am very talkative, it won’t be a problem to write the whole entry starting from the one word, like “work” or “serve”. I have so many to say! Stay in touch :)

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Just my scribble

Well, first of all, I wanted to say talk about TED. Actually, that the photo, which (that) is attached to my scribble, is a screenshot from one of the videos from TED. If you don’t know what to do with your life or are disappointed with the fact that the world is no  more not interesting anymore for you, check out the TED channel on Youtube. To tell the truth, they have several channels. The one, where they only upload only videos with youngsters, the one with their special lessons, and they even have one with only videos for women (some of them made me cry, by the way). With the help of one video I’ve learnt how to draw within 15 minutes. There are a lot of videos and articles which (that) promise you that you will have that or this (this or that - we never say that or this for some reason - I don't know why!) skill after reading/watching, but in the end you should work hard anyway. But that video! I can really draw now! I was doing everything what the man from video asked (told) me to do and then I shown showed my drawings to sister and she asked me if I had taken some drawing course in the Internet. I can give you link if you are interested, just write me a message, because it is really worth watching!
The only thing that unites all these various videos is that they have an idea worth spreading, something that draws people’s attention, you can learn something new from every video. And, hmm, it this is not an advertisement, they haven’t paid me for these words, I just like to share with people priceless information with people :)
And here’s the idea of one video. Here’s are 8 traits of successful people.
Everyone wants to be successful. It doesn’t matter what our occupation is and it doesn’t matter if we are 18 or 42. Everyone wants to be successful, but not everyone knows the answer to the question: how to (does one/do you) become successful? And that man (by the way, you can even see him in the picture) interviewed a lot of successful people: artists, journalists, pop stars, directors, women and men. It was a huge work and finally he has distingushed (picked out) these 8 traits. I want to speak about myself a little bit in this entry (it is my account, right? :D) , and I want to discuss every trait and what role it plays in my life and give you some of my tips.
Well, after such an intoduction I don’t have characters anymore: D I think I will dedicate the a whole entry to each trait since I have very good ideas for all of them and also since I am very talkative, it won’t be a problem to write the whole entry starting from the one (a single) word, like “work” or “serve”. I have so many much to say! Stay in touch :)


Judging from the way you write it looks as though you work very quickly, and I suspect that you speak very confidently too. In that case these minor corrections will probably be "like water off a duck's back". I look forward very much to further installations! By the way, I think that there is one major omission from the eight traits, but I have no space!

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Just my scribble

Well, first of all, I wanted to talk about TED. Actually, that photo, which is attached to my scribble, is a screenshot from one of the videos from TED. If you don’t know what to do with your life or are disappointed with the fact that the world has no more interest for you, check out TED channel on Youtube. To tell the truth, they have several channels. One where they upload only videos with youngsters, one with their special lessons, and they even have one with only videos for women (some of these made me cry, by the way). With the help of one video I learnt how to draw within 15 minutes. There are a lot of videos and articles which promise you this or that skill after reading/watching but in the end you should work hard anyway. But that video! I can really draw now! I was doing everything what the man from video asked me to do and then I showed my drawings to sister and she asked me if I had taken some drawing course on the Internet. I can give you link if you are interested, just write me a message, because it is really worth watching!
The only thing that unites all these various videos is that they have an idea worth spreading, something that can draw people’s attention and you can learn something new from every video. And, hmm, this is not an advertisement and they haven’t paid me for these words. I just like to share with people priceless information :)
And here’s the idea of one video. Here are 8 traits of successful people.
Everyone wants to be successful. It doesn’t matter what our occupation is and it doesn’t matter if we are 18 or 42. Everyone wants to be successful but not everyone knows the answer to the question: how to become successful? And that man (by the way, you can even see him in the picture) interviewed a lot of successful people: artists, journalists, pop stars, directors, women and men. It was a huge work and finally he has discerned these 8 traits. I want to speak about myself a little bit in this entry (it is my account, right? :D) , and I want to discuss every trait and what role it plays in my life and give you some of my tips.
Well, after such an introduction I don’t have any remaining characters: D I think I will dedicate the whole entry to each trait since I have very good ideas for all of them and also since I am very talkative, it won’t be a problem to write the whole entry starting from the one word, like “work” or “serve”. I have so many things to say! Stay in touch :)

Very well written!

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