My poor english :)

Hi! I´m Jime and I am from Argentina. I´m a graphic designer.
I wish  hope/ want to travel to New york next year so I try to practice english( In this context, you would say : so I am trying to learn English)
I love that city, the people, museum, touristic centers, different cultures, food.
I hope realize that trip and learn more about english and graphic design.  I hope that I will be able to go to New York City, so I can learn how to speak English better and learn about graphic design.

I hope my corrections are/were helpful

Bye!

My poor english :)

Hi! I´m Jime, from Argentina. I´m a graphic designer.
I wish to travel to New York next year so I can  practice English.
I love that the  city, the people, museums, touristic centers, different cultures, and the food.
I hope realize to take that trip and learn more about English and graphic design.

Bye!

 Nice job!

 

 

My poor english :)

Hi! I´m Jime, from Argentina. I´m a graphic designer.
I wish to (you can also say: I'd like to/I want to/I hope to) travel to New York next year so I try to practice English. (I would say: which is why I'm trying to practice English)
I love the city, the people, museums, touristic centers (maybe: tourist sites), different cultures, food.
I hope realize that trip (I hope that I'll be able to go on this trip) and learn more about English and graphic design.

Bye!

Very good!