Crazy weather
Nowadays the weather here is quite strange at all. We are in autumn fall, normally we get cold days, very dry and windy. But we don't know it changes, we got mild rain daily and on Sunday we were struck by a terrible storm and had till twists near my city. Everything was destroyed there. Floods every where, much rain is causing this. We got no idea what's happen next....
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Crazy weather
Nowadays the weather here is quite strange at all.1 We are in autumn fall2, normally 3we get cold days, very dry and windy. But we don't know it changes, we 4got mild rain daily and on Sunday we were struck by a terrible storm and 5 had till twists near my city. Everything was destroyed there. Floods every where6, much7 rain is causing this. We got no idea what's happen next....81. "at all" isn't needed
2. Autumn is considered British English. Fall is American. Choose carefully which one is best for your situation.
3. I would end the sentence after "fall" and begin the next one with "Normally..."
4. The same point as in 3
5. Try to avoid putting more than one "and" in a sentence. Sometimes you cannot avoid this, but when you are describing something it isn't always very elegant.
6. Everywhere (one word)
7. A lot of
8. We have no idea what will happen next
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