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Write some sentences to use some new word I am imaginative enough to think of new idears,but sometimes ,I detch myself from reality .Jusr like one day I had a dream , my dog which could speak English to me .That's amazing all right ,she is a girl ,and could performance ,which was so fabulous.Then,I talked every thing that I imagined to my mom,In her vioce ,I could sence of certain tinge of irony ,which made me so gloomy. 我会有很多幻想,但都有点不切实际,就比如有一天,我做了一个梦,梦见我的狗狗会跟我讲英语,很神奇,对吧,她是一个女孩,会表演而且还非常棒,于是,我把所做的梦告诉了妈妈,从她的声音中我听到了讽刺的意味,那使我很沮丧 I know a man who is so sweet and cordial,we are so reliance to him .But one day,the police charged him with car theft, when we heared about that,the neighbor were cluster of him around the actress to ask that what's wrong with you ? Everyone can't believe that. 我们知道有一个人非常诚信友善,我们都很信任他,有一天,警察说他偷了别人的车,当时我们听见这个消息,邻居都一拥而上问到底怎么回事,大家都不相信这是真的。

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Write some sentences to use some new word

I am imaginative enough to think of new ideas, but sometimes, I detach myself from reality. For example, one day I had a dream, that my dog which could speak English to me. That's amazing all right, she is a girl, and could performance, which was so fabulous. Then I talked about everything that I had imagined to my mom. I could sense of slight tinge of irony in her voice, which made me very gloomy.
我会有很多幻想,但都有点不切实际,就比如有一天,我做了一个梦,梦见我的狗狗会跟我讲英语,很神奇,对吧,她是一个女孩,会表演而且还非常棒,于是,我把所做的梦告诉了妈妈,从她的声音中我听到了讽刺的意味,那使我很沮丧
I know a man who is so sweet and cordial, we are very reliant on him. But one day, the police charged him with car theft, when we heard about that, the neighbours were clustered around him (the actress? I don't understand this bit) to ask that what was wrong with him? No one could believe it.
我们知道有一个人非常诚信友善,我们都很信任他,有一天,警察说他偷了别人的车,当时我们听见这个消息,邻居都一拥而上问到底怎么回事,大家都不相信这是真的


Hope this helps, I didn't understand the actress bit I'm afraid. Also, with punctuation, always put it right after the word without a space. For example:

Wrong: After dinner ,I went to the shops .

Right: After dinner, I went to the shops.

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