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China flag Jo
Apr 25, 2010 I made up my mind! When I woke up this morning, I was lying in my bed and made the big decision: I will dump him! I told myself it's long enough and I couldn't bare it any more. So I have to get him out of my mind, my heart and my life! I will not smile to him when I meet him in the office tomorrow. I will not share my delicioius chacolate with him. He never says thanks for that. Anyway, I will totally ignore him just as he did to me. I made up my mind that I will not love him any more any longer, even if he never knows it. I deserve a good future shining as the sunshine out of my door in this spring!

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Hello, Jo

Let me revise your submission slightly (leaving content essentially unchanged; just a few minor details).

"Apr 25, 2010 I made up my mind!

When I woke up this morning, I was lying in my bed and made the big decision: I will/would dump him! I told myself it's long  enough is enough and I cannot couldn't bare bear it any more. So I have to get him out of my mind, my heart, and my life!  I will not smile to him when I meet him in the office tomorrow. I will not share my delicioius chocolate with him. [After all] He never [even] says thanks for that, either.  Anyway, I will totally ignore him just as he did to me. I made up my mind that I will not love him any more any longer, even if he never knows it.  I deserve a good future shining as the sunshine out of my door in this spring!"
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Apr 25, 2010 I made up my mind!


I will not smile at him when I meet him in the office tomorrow.

I will not share my delicioius chocolate with him.

I deserve a good future, shining like the sunshine outside my door in this spring!

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