Paul Newman
When I was little, I had a crash on Paul Newman because he was so handsome. As I grew up, this crash moved to the actor named Robert De Niro. I have recently rewatched Newman's movies such as Hustler and Nobody's Fool. And now I recognized how great actor he was not only his looks but also his performances.
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Paul Newman
When I was little, I had a crush on Paul Newman because he was so handsome. As I grew up, this crush moved to the actor named Robert De Niro. I have recently rewatched Newman's movies, such as "Hustler" and "Nobody's Fool." Now I recognize how great an actor he was-not only for his looks, but also his performances.0
Just some minor changes in my correction. I didn't change "...to the actor named Robert De Niro" because it's not incorrect, just a little strange. If you want a more natural version, try "...moved to another actor named Robert De Niro."
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the word is "crush" not crash.
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