Welcome to Hangzhou

Hi, everybody! Have you ever heard of Hangzhou? Hangzhou is the capital city in Zhejiang province. It is the most beautiful city of China, and it’s also one of the most popular tourist cities of China. Welcome to Hangzhou! When you come to Hangzhou, you simply must visit certain places.
The first is the West Lake, which is located in the southwest of Hangzhou city. The lake covers an area of 6.5 square kilometers. The view of West Lake is extremely enchanting. The West Lake scenic area is comprised of more than ten separate scenic spots. In my next post, I'll introduce them to you.

Good job! I am looking forward to reading about them! As to the English, your composition is fine, not really much to correct, and everything was easily understood. Improving your vocabulary will allow you to compose sentences with more depth rather than the generic "tour guide" stock phrases of above. Apologies, I truly mean no offense, but given your grasp of the language, as evidenced above, with just a bit more effort on your part, fluency is not far away. I hope this helps! J.