A exciting day
On June 24,2016 friday sunny
Today is exciting.I attended an exam for long distance driving.There were other five examinees with me , a coach invigilated us.This is the first time that I drove on the road. When I sat in the driver's seat,I felt so nervous that hard to operate cluth and accelerator correctly.The coach severely criticized me.It made me frustrated,but I didn’t angry.Be allowed by coach, I pull over the car and took breath deeply,I spent several minutes to make me calm down. When I Started the car again, I found me could easy driving.Anyway,I passed though my exam finally.
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This was easy to understand as a native speaker, and well done!
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A exciting day
On June 24, 2016, Friday; sunnyToday was exciting. I attended an exam for long distance driving.There were five other test-takers with me; a coach proctored us.This was the first time that I drove on the road. When I sat in the driver's seat, I felt so nervous that it was hard to operate the clutch and accelerator correctly.The coach severely criticized me. It made me frustrated, but I didn’t get angry. When I was allowed by the coach, I pulled over the car and took breathed deeply. I spent It took several minutes to make me calm down. When I started the car again, I found I could drive easily.Anyway, I passed though my exam, finally.
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