My playing drums experience in front of crowds I started learning to play the drums 10 years ago, and I liked it but I didn't really enjoyed practicing, so I just played and practiced while I was at t

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My playing drums experience in front of crowds I started learning to play the drums 10 years ago, and I liked it but I didn't really enjoyed practicing, so I just played and practiced while I was at the class. I began in August of 2006 and in December of that year I had my first concert. First I did a demostration of what I had learned through out those months with mixed rhythims all together with my teacher, and then I played "We will rock you" by Queen. It was actually fun, I wasn't nervous and I happened as if I had done it all my life. The next year, also in December, I played "Knocking on heaven's door" by Guns n' Roses and it was the first time people gave me a round of applause. I stood up and bowed before them in order to show my gratitude for their gesture. For the year 2008 I had being practincing with a band that was formed with other instruments students, such as a guitar, a bass guitar and a singer. We played "Back in black" by Ac/Dc and "Parallel universe" by Red Hot Chili Peppers and we had a huge crowd cheering us as I had never felt. It was awesome, but eventually everything has to end. On 2009 I did the same as the year before, I joined the same kind of band to play another song, "El pibe de los astilleros" by Patricio rey y sus redonditos de ricota. It was a mess! People didn't rehearse, I was the only one practicing the song, and when we had to play it on the stage, it went not as good as I'd like it to go, but in the end people still gave us a sincere round of applause. Next time I'll talk a bit more about my last concerts' experience. I'll appreciate any correction!

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My playing drums experience in front of crowds My experience playing the drums in front of crowds

I started learning to play the drums 10 years ago, and I liked it but I didn't really enjoyed practicing, so I just played and practiced while I was at the class. I began in August of 2006 and in December of that year I had my first concert.
First I did a demostration of what I had learned through out/during those months with mixed rhythims all together (1) with my teacher, and then I played "We will rock you" by Queen. It was actually fun, I wasn't nervous and I played as if I had done it all my life. The next year, also in December, I played "Knocking on heaven's door" (2) by Guns n' Roses and it was the first time people gave me a round of applause. I stood up and bowed before them in order to show my gratitude for their gesture (un poco raro pero no tengo una sugerencia) . For the year 2008 I had being practicing with a band that was formed with other students playing different instruments, such as a guitar, a bass guitar; there was also a singer. We played "Back in black" by Ac/Dc and "Parallel universe" by Red Hot Chili Peppers and we had a huge crowd cheering us that I had never felt/experienced before. It was awesome, but eventually everything has to end. In 2009 I did the same as the year before, I joined the same kind of band to play another song, "El pibe de los astilleros" by Patricio rey y sus redonditos de ricota. It was a mess! People didn't rehearse, I was the only one practicing the song, and when we had to play it on the stage, it went not as good (it didn't go as well )as I would have liked (it to have gone opcional), but in the end people still gave us a sincere/good round of applause.

(1) all together usualmente significa dos otras personas; aquí es solamente tu y el maestro

(2)Fantastica cancion me gusta la primera version del autor-cantante Bob Dylan en la pelicula

Next time I'll talk a bit more about my last concerts' experience. I'll appreciate any corrections! usualmente usamos el plural en este tipo de construccion

My playing drums experience in front of crowds experiences of playing the drums in front of a crowd.

I started learning how to play the drums 10 years ago.and I liked it but I didn't really enjoyed practicing, so I just played and practiced while I was at in the class. I began in August of 2006 and in December of that year I had my first concert.
First I did a demostration demonstration of what I had learned through out those months with mixed rhythims rhythms all together with my teacher, and then I played "We will rock you" by Queen. It was actually fun, I wasn't nervous and I happened had acted as if I had done it all my life. The next year, also in following December I played "Knocking on heaven's door" by Guns n' Roses and it was the first time people gave me a round of applause. I stood up and bowed before them in order to show my gratitude for their gesture. For the year In 2008 I had being practincing practicing with a band that was formed with other instruments students, by students who played other instruments such as a guitar, a bass guitar and a singer. We played "Back in black" by Ac/Dc and "Parallel universe" by Red Hot Chili Peppers. and we had a huge crowd cheering us as on.I had never felt. It was awesome, but eventually everything has to end. On 2009 I did the same as the year before, I joined the same kind of band to play another song, "El pibe de los astilleros" by Patricio rey y sus redonditos de ricota. It was a mess! People My band mates didn't rehearse and I was the only one practicing the song who practiced the song. and When we had to play it on the stage, it went not as good did not go as well as I'd have liked it to go, but in the end people still gave us a sincere round of applause.

Next time I'll talk a bit more about my last concerts' experience the experience of my last concert. I'll appreciate any correction!

My experience playing the drums in front of a crowd.

I started learning how to play the drums 10 years ago in August of 2006. I liked it, but I didn't really enjoy practicing. I would only play and practice during class. In December of that year I had my first concert.

First, I performed a demonstration of what I had learned through out those months. I played mixed rhythms altogether with my teacher, and then I played "We will rock you" by Queen. It turned out to be really fun, I wasn't nervous and I performed as if I had done it all my life. The following year, also in December, I played "Knocking on heaven's door" by Guns n' Roses, and it was the first time people gave me a round of applause. I stood up and bowed before them in order to show my gratitude for their gesture. By the year 2008, I began practicing with a band, it was formed by students who played other instruments, such as a guitar, bass guitar, and a singer. We played "Back in black" by AC/DC and "Parallel universe" by Red Hot Chili Peppers and we had a huge crowd cheering us on, unlike any other I have experienced before. It was awesome, but eventually everything comes to an end. In 2009, I did the same as the year prior, I joined the same kind of band to play another song, "El pibe de los astilleros" by Patricio Rey y Sus Redonditos de Ricota. It was a mess! People didn't rehearse, I was the only one practicing the song, and when we had to play it on stage, it didn't go as I hoped, but in the end people still gave us a sincere round of applause.

Next time, I'll talk a bit more about my last concert's experience. I'll appreciate any correction!

they seemed quite a lot of mistakes to me jaja, thank you for your comment!

Overall, great job! Just a few grammatical errors. I submitted my corrections below. Keep up the good work pibe!

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