Correzioni · 6
American English Corrections
Last Sunday
Hello, my friends; it is me... Lucas!
Today is Friday, but I want to talk some about last Sunday. I passed the day with my girlfriend. I woke up at 10 AM hahahah (I know it was a little late but since it was Sunday, it was okay haha).
My parents and my brother were to have lunch at our other home/house, but I did not go. I did not go because I wanted to go see my girlfriend. I took a shower and I went to my aunt's house; her name is Nerivan. Later, we went to my girlfriend's house.
I had lunch at her house and later, my girlfriend, my aunt and I ate / went out to have açaí. At 11 PM I said, “Good Night!” to everything and I went to bed.
I appreciate your corrections. Thank you :)
Past Sunday
Hello my friends, it is me... Lucas!Today is Friday, but I want to say about past Sunday. I passed the day with my girlfriend. I wake up at 10 AM hahahah (I know, is a little late but as it was Sunday, okay haha).
My parents and my brother was to launch in other house, but I did not go. I did not go because I wanted to go see my girlfriend. I took shower and I went to house of my aunt, her name is Nerivan. After, we went to house of my girlfriend.
I launch in her house and after, my girlfriend, my aunt and I went eat açaí. At 11 PM I said, “Good Night!” to everything and I slept.
I appreciate your correction, Thank you :)
Vuoi progredire più velocemente?
Unisciti a questa comunità di apprendimento e prova gli esercizi gratuiti!
Non perdere l'opportunità di imparare una lingua comodamente da casa tua. Esplora la nostra selezione di insegnanti di lingue esperti e iscriviti subito alla tua prima lezione!
Inizia a imparare oggi
