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lo ago o no I Want to do a tatto of my favorite team football but me parents not let me because do no like. are you?

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lo ago o no  << This is not English.

I Wwant to do  get a tattoo of my favorite football team football, but me  my parents not let me because they do no like. are you?


A few things: My is the possessive.  If something belongs to you, you say "my" not "me".  My parents.  My tattoo.  My favorite team. (I think you know that, but this is a reminder!)

"Are you" makes no sense here.  Are you asking if your reader agrees with you or your parents?  If your reader is going to get a tattoo?  What?

Also "do not like" needs an object.  What don't your parents like?  Tattoos?  Football?

Finally, descriptive words come before their nouns in English.  Football team, not team football. :)  Big tattoo.  Favorite team.  Cranky parents. 


Good luck with your parents and with your English.  You've made a good start on your English.  I can't make any promises about your parents.

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