do you play with toys when you grow up?
i love toys, i am a huge fan of lego, and i can play with them all day. also i have many other kind of toys.
i like to play with toys rather than play with human being, the toys don't talk, they don't gossip, they just smile and stay there. i often play with toys the whole afternoon, play some post-rock cds, smoke, and write some feelings on the wall.
i found that adults seldom play toys, so sad, i'm 22 years old and i love toys so much, but why you guys don't play with toys anymore?
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First a quick correction... well, two. They're similar to one another. First, always begin every sentence with an upper case (capital) letter. Second, always use an upper case letter for the word "I."
Your writing is clear and easy to understand. Those two capitalization rules will make it look more mature and polished.
As for toys, I think that is generational. Many people your age seem to still enjoy their toys. Also, people who enjoy toys often make great parents because they play with their children. As for me, no I do not enjoy toys and I did not when I was your age. My oldest son, who is close to your age, does still enjoy Legos and video games. His younger brother, who is fourteen, does not.
Good luck with your English!
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