Job interview in English - need some help :)
The most common question in a job interview is :
"Why don't you tell me about yourself?"
I need to work on my answer so please feel free to correcet me :
I"m 28 years old,
I currently work as a Bartender in a luxury restaurant.
I have five years of experience in the food and beverage industry, and I really enjoy providing my services to the guests.
Besides gaining experience, I have also compleated a bachelor's degree in hotel management and tourism.
For the last three years I'v been living in a Eilat, a global tourism city, so I have also gained great experience working with tourists from all around the world.
do you think I should add or remove something?
thank you for your help!
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Job interview in English - need some help :)
The most common question in a job interview is :"Why don't you tell me about yourself?"
I need to work on my answer so please feel free to correct me :
I'm 28 years old.
I currently work as a bartender in a luxury* {better: an upscale} restaurant.
I have five years of experience in the food and beverage industry, and I really enjoy providing my services to the guests.
Besides gaining {practical} experience, I have also completed a bachelor's degree in Hotel Management and Tourism.
For the last three years, I've been living in a Eilat, a global tourism city {or "destination"}, so I have also gained great experience working with tourists from all around the world.
Do you think I should add or remove something?
Thank you for your help!
*We usually use "luxury" for physical things like goods or hotels rather than services, so "upscale" is more appropriate here.
As a recommendation, how about adding a personal anecdote about your experiences at work, maybe in the context of working with tourists from other countries? It would provide more insight into your personality, and that's part of what the interviewers are looking for.
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Job interview in English - need some help :)
The most common question in a job interview is :"Why don't you tell me about yourself?"
I need to work on my answer so please feel free to correcet me :
I"m 28 years old,
I currently work as a bartender in a luxury ( you can say luxury hotel but not restaurant) (upmarket Is a better word to use with ) restaurant.
I have five years experience in the food and beverage industry, I really enjoy providing my services to the guests.
(I really enjoy providing excellent customer service to all the guests)
Besides gaining work experience, I have also completed a bachelor's degree in Hotel Management and Tourism.
For the last three years I'v been living in a Eilat, a global tourism city, (destination) so I have also gained great experience working with tourists from all around the world.
do you think I should add or remove something?
thank you for your help!
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Job interview in English - need some help :)
The most common question in a job interview is :"Why don't you tell me about yourself?"
I need to work on my answer so please feel free to correcet me :
I"m 28 years old,
I am currently working as a Bartender in a luxury restaurant.
I have five years of experience in the food and beverage industry, and I really enjoy providing my services to the guests.
Besides gaining experience, I have also compleated a Bachelor's degree in hotel management and tourism.
For the last three years I've been living in a Eilat, a global tourism city, so I have also gained great experience working with tourists from all around the world.
do you think I should add or remove something?
thank you for your help!
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Job interview in English - need some help :)
The most common question in a job interview is :"Why don't you tell me about yourself?"
I need to work on my answer so please feel free to correcet me:
I'm 28 years old,
I currently work as a bartender in a luxury / luxurious (sounds more like a native) restaurant.
I have five years of experience in the food and beverage industry, and I really enjoy providing my services to the guests.
Besides gaining experience, I have also compleated (no 'a', but that's just a spelling thing) a bachelor's degree in hotel management and tourism.
For the last three years I've been living in an Eilat, a global tourism city, so I have also gained great / much (again, sounds more like a native) experience working with tourists from all around / over (both are correct, just giving you some more examples) the world.
Do you think I should add or remove something?
Thank you for your help!
Your text is very good in general, most mistakes are spelling mistakes. Good job, and I hope you're getting the job! If not, it's not because of your English!
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Thank you very much Victoria!
I think I will add something like what you wrote...Maybe the total answer should include formal and informal things about myself...
I will raise this question in the discussions section
I really appreciate your help, thank you!
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