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Not for racial discrimination I won't accept racial discrimination. I'm Japanese and live in Japan. I see frequently racial discrimination to Chinese and Korean. You know, the government and society of Japan have a lot of political problems between the government and society of China and Korea. I won't explain about the problem in detail but there is a non-both. There are people who claim that Chinese and Korean are biologically less than Japanese or any other human beings. They, who discriminate Chinese and Korean, argue that there are scientific basis for their claims. The discrimination seldom showed in everyday life. However, there are someone behave as if they are racist mainly on the Internet. They seldom assert their claim in real life, except their drinking party in the fellow. They perhaps know that their claims equal to racism. I don't think it's possible that any race is less than the other one. What racism is the biggest political problem, but racism doesn't solve the political problem. I won't explain about the problem in detail but there is a non-both. → I won't explain about the problem in detail but there are faults in us both. What racism is the biggest political problem, but racism doesn't solve the political problem. →Although we(they?) bring racial discrimination in politics, racial discrimination won't solve political problem. On the other hand, racism is the biggest political problem. (It's hard to explain.)

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Not for racial discrimination

I won't accept racial discrimination.

I'm Japanese and live in Japan. I see frequently frequently see racial discrimination towards Chinese and Koreans. You know, the government and society of Japan have a lot of political problems between the government and society of China and Korea.

there are a lot of political problems between the government and societies or Japan, and China and Korea.

Or you can use: the government and society of Japan have a lot of political problems with the governments and societies of China and Korea.

I won't explain about the problems in detail but there is a non-both there are many problems between Japan and both countries. (I am not sure what you tried to write here.)

There are people who claim that Chinese and Koreans are biologically less inferior than to Japanese or any other human beings. They, who discriminate against Chinese and Koreans, argue that there are scientific basis bases for their claims.

(Or use: there is a scientific basis for their claims. Basis is singular, bases is plural.)


The discrimination seldom showed shows in everyday life. However, there are someone some people who behave as if they are a racist mainly mostly on the Internet.

(I think a better sentence would be: However, there are some people who only/mostly behave in a racist way on the internet. The difference is that I think you are trying to say they are a racist, but they only show it online. However, your sentence suggests they are not a racist, but the behave like one.)

They seldom assert their claims in real life, except their drinking party in the fellow. except with their friends whilst drinking.

(Or use: except while drinking with their friends. Or: except with their drinking friends.)

They perhaps know that their claims are equal to racism.

(Or: They perhaps know that their claims are racist.)

I don't think it's possible that any race is less inferior than the any other one. What racism is the biggest political problem, but racism doesn't solve the political problem.

Racism is a key political problem, but racism is not the only political problem.

Or use: Racism is one of the main political problems, but eradicating racism would not solve all the political problems.



If you have any queries just send me a message, otherwise I am sure other people will help. Your use of "less" is often incorrect. Less means a lower volume of something such as "less water". You may need to use "fewer" to where there is a lower count of something such as "fewer dogs". The way you are using less can be correct, but sounds unnatural and would generally only be used by people when speaking about individuals. Although grammatically your usage may be correct, it sounds odd. (I am English, but not an English teacher ;) )

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Not for No to racial discrimination

I won't accept racial discrimination.

I'm Japanese and live in Japan. I see frequently see racial discrimination towards Chinese and Korean people. You know, the government and society of Japan have a lot of political problems between do not have good relations with the government and society of China and Korea. I won't explain about the problem in detail but there is a non-both (<-- I didn't understand this word).

There are people who claim that Chinese and Korean people are biologically less than inferior to the Japanese or any other human beings. They, Those who discriminate against the Chinese and Koreans, argue that there are is a scientific basis for their claims. The discrimination seldom shows in everyday life. However, there are someone some who behave as if they are racist mainly on the Internet. They seldom assert their claim in real life, except their at a drinking party in the fellow with those who think alike. They perhaps know that their claims equal to racism.

I don't think it's possible that any race is less than the inferior to any other one. What racism is the biggest political problem, but racism doesn't solve the political problem.(<-- I didn't understand this sentence). 


Kohei-san, congratulations on your text! You attempted a number of complex expressions, and chose a very ambitious topic!

One note: when referring to groups of people sharing the same nationality, use "the Chinese" / "Chinese people" and "Koreans" or "Korean people" (not just "Chinese"/"Korean").

I agree with you - it is sad and frustrating that some people hold racist views and discriminate against others. Let's hope racism is eradicated soon!

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Not for racial discrimination

I won't accept racial discrimination.

I'm Japanese and live in Japan. I see frequently come across racial discrimination against the Chinese and Koreans in my country. You know, the government and society people of Japan have many/a lot of/ political issues problems between  with the governments and society people of China and Korea. I won't explain about the problem go into them / these issues in detail, but I will just want to say that the fault lies with all the parties concerned.

There are some people who claim that Chinese and Korean people are biologically inferior less than to Japanese people and any other races, for that matter.. human beings. They, Those who discriminate against them/against the Chinese and Korean people/ argue that there is scientific basis for their claims. This sort of discrimination seldom shows itself in our everyday lives. However, there are someone many Japanese who behave as if they are like a have shown how racist they can be, even though it is mainly confined to the Internet. They seldom assert their claim of superiority in real life, except maybe when they are in the company of fellow Japanese , such as during a drinking party when they are together. their drinking party in the fellow. They Perhaps, they know that their to make this sort of claim publicly will make them  racists. equal to racism.

I don't think (it's possible that) any race can be less inferior or superior than  the to any other. 

What racism is the biggest political problem, but racism doesn't solve the political problem.X

> While the prevalence of racism against the Chinese and Koreans in my country is due to the political problems my country is having with their respective governments, it still will not help us solve the problem we have with them.




I won't explain about the problem in detail but there is a non-both.
→ I won't explain about the problem in detail but there are faults in us both.

What racism is the biggest political problem, but racism doesn't solve the political problem.
→Although we(they?) bring racial discrimination in politics, racial discrimination won't solve political problem. On the other hand, racism is the biggest political problem. (It's hard to explain.)

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Thank you for your waiting. You asked me what do I think about biracial Japanese. I think nothing about it especially. I won't treat him or her special or give any handicap just because he or she is biracial. Unfortunately, there are many students who are humiliated. And racial discrimination is one of the reason of the conduct. I think that nearly nobody respects Aynu but I don't say nobody. There are only two persons who speak Aynu language as their mother language. Some linguists and researchers make their efforts to protect Aynu language and culture from their extinction. Of course there used to be racial or ethnic discrimination. However, people interested in ethnic minorities are not many, even if they are not racist. It's a little bit different from racism.
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i hope you will. ahhh i made some stupid mistakes in my previous comment.

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