Please help me correct my grammars...Pleaseee TT
please help me check my grammar.
"The first Western culture came to the Japanese is religion, Christianity. The Christianity’s history in Japan is the story of missions; Jesuit missionary’s success, the failure, banishment and assassination. Most of the tragedies were came from traditional Japanese government’s policy. However, these events reflect the original Japanese frame of thought that be antagonistic of outsider’s culture and the otherness. Nevertheless, the Christianity was accepted when they came with technology and advancement that the Japanese didn’t have at that time. This bought with the time of ‘trend of Western culture’ in the Japanese history."
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Please help me correct my grammars...Pleaseee TT
please help me check my grammar."The first Western piece of Western culture came to come to the Japanese is religion, namely Christianity. The Christianity’s history in Japan is the story of missions; Jesuit missionary’s success, the failure, banishment and assassination. Most of the tragedies were came from traditional Japanese government’s policy. (stylistically "of" construction is better here) However, these events reflect the original Japanese frame of thought that be is antagonistic of to outsider’s' culture and the otherness (strange word...consider changing it). Nevertheless, the Christianity was accepted when they it came with technology and advancement progress that the Japanese didn’t have at that time. This brought with the time of ‘trend of Western culture’ in to the Japanese history."
Thank you.
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