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The new café “Your college is going to create a new student café. You have been asked to write a report for the principal, explaining why students don’t use the existing facilities and making recommendations for the new café. Write your report” Introduction. The aim of this report is to outline what can be improved in the new café of the university, in order to be successful and to explain why the old one is not used by the students these last years. Opening hours. The old café closes too early. If the opening hours are extended and the students are able to enjoy their free time after classes, the attendance of the new café will increase for sure. More variety. Despite the actual food is very tasty, in this moment students don’t have too much choices. It would be a great idea to increase the product offer, perhaps adding options for vegetarian people and free-gluten food, as well as healthier one. New furniture. A point that could be reconsidered is changing the hard chairs for another ones a little more comfortable. Furthermore, adding a section with soft sofas would attract students that want to chill. Conclusion The university truly needs an space for relaxing and chilling, so if it is possible to create a café that closes later, offers a tasty and healthy variety of meal and gets more comfortable, I’m sure that it will be the new meeting point of the college.

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The new café

“Your college is going to create a new student café. You have been asked to write a report for the principal, explaining why students don’t use the existing facilities and making recommendations for the new café.
Write your report”
Introduction.
The aim of this report is to outline what can be improved in the new café of the university, in order to be successful, and to explain why the old one is has not been used by the students these last for the past few years.
Opening hours.
The old café closes too early. If the opening hours were extended and the students were able to enjoy their free time after classes, the attendance of the new café would increase for sure.
More variety.
Despite Although the old cafe's actual food is very tasty, in this moment currently students don’t have too much many choices. It would be a great idea to increase the product offer expand the menu, perhaps adding options for vegetarians people and for free-gluten-free food, as well as healthier one items.
New furniture.
A point that could be reconsidered is changing the hard chairs for another more comfortable ones a little more comfortable. Furthermore, adding a section with soft sofas would attract students that (better: who) want to chill out.
Conclusion
The university truly needs an space for relaxing and chilling out, so if it is would be possible to create a more comfortable café that closes later, and offers a tasty and healthy variety of meals and gets more comfortable, I’m sure that it would be the new meeting place point of the college.

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