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What a full day We attended an academic conference this morning. This conference was hosted by Institute of Clinical Pharmacology, Central South University, and several academicians of Chinese Academy of Engineering(the most excellent scientists in China) were invited to give speeches about " precision medicine", which explains the terms of “tailoring the treatment to individual patient”. There is very much difference among groups, which is resulted from the diversity of DNA and environment, so that different people with the same disease received the same treatment could get different result, which may vary between recovery and deterioration, living and death. Precision medicine that the kind and dosage of drugs are prescribed in comformity to your DNA, may be a method to solve this problem. We were appreciated with those achivement acquired by academicians, seeing that it's difficult to translate the academic success to practical application. Afert lunch, I came to attend a symposium in our faculty. Compared to the speech from these academicians, our talking was too superfical. After that, I went to did some work for a senior sister. No sooner than I commenced to do it than she found some trouble about this work, a huge problem, so we must stop. Academicians are too much 厉害 than us.

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After lunch, I came to attended a faculty symposium in our faculty. Compared to the speeches from these academicians, our talking conversation was too superficial. After that, I went to did do some work for an older senior sister. No sooner than had I commenced to do doing it than she found some trouble about this work, a huge problem, so we must had to stop. "must"=present or future; "had to"=past
Academicians are too much more 厉害 than us.


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We attended an academic conference this morning. This conference was hosted by the Institute of Clinical Pharmacology, Central South University, and several academicians of academics from the Chinese Academy of Engineering (the most excellent pre-eminent scientists in China) were invited to give speeches about " precision medicine", which explains the terms can be explained in terms of “tailoring the treatment to individual patient”.  "Academicians" 比较陈旧的 There is very much difference among groups, which is resulted from the diversity of DNA and environment, Differences in genetics and environment lead to divergent phenotypes, so that different people with the same disease receiving the same treatment could get different results, which may vary between recovery and deterioration, living life and death. Precision medicine, which implies/demands that the kind type and dosage of drugs are be prescribed in comformity to your DNA, "be"=subjunctive mood may be a method to solve this problem. We were appreciated with those achievements acquired by academicians, seeing that it's difficult to translate the academic success to practical application.

Academicians are too much 厉害 than us.

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