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Trying to start again
I haven't written a notebook entry for a while but I'll try again and I hope that I can keep this going for at least a month.Recently, I've been rude* so I wake up around 10 a.m.. I should change the rhythm and use the time to improve my English but it is more difficult for me to study another language by myself than I thought, even though I've gone go abroad.
When I woke up I was in on the little sofa. It This meant I fell had fallen asleep in on the sofa while I was watching a movie last night. It made me so tired because it was a little sofa for one person so I've got a stiff neck. I felt bad from the beginning of the day. Actually, I woke up a couple of sometimes but I just didn't want to move another inch. Anyway, I got up and ate a bowl of yogurt and half of a kiwi fruit as breakfast and watched the movie from the beginning again, since the story didn't come into my mind directly last night because I almost slept during was falling asleep while watching it. It was nice story. The main character has a memory remembering problem it means he loose every memory of one day after he sleeps but he has memory of the life before the problem happened.**(This explanation is so bad. Do you understand the basic story?) However he fell in love even though he forgets the face of the girl who he loves. I imagined I were him. it's so sad but I really like this movie. After the movie, I still had enough time to go work so I watched another movie. It was not so bad but worse than before the previous one.
After watching the movie, I made wrote a resume for a new job. I want to try to work at a restaurant or cafe which where there aren't any Japanese. It would be great to learn English. It was totally different how to write resume with Japanese one from writing a resume in Japanese. So it was a little bit difficult to make it by myself but my roommate Patrick helped me so much! Thanks Paddy. I could was able to finish it before I went to work.
About work, it was not so quiet but longer than usual. After finishing work I drank some a couple glasses of red wine.
みずきさん!!!お久しぶりですよ。It's so good to see you back! (Before I saw that you had written a Notebook, I was cooking Mirin, and I thought about you!).
I can see that your English has improved. A few corrections and notes:
* "I've been rude" - I'm not sure what you mean by this. Are you saying, "I've been a slacker" (i.e. lazy) or that you feel you were being rude by not posting on italki?
** You're right. Your explanation is bad. But I can tell you're talking about "50 First Dates." I love that movie. I think you want to say, "The main character has a memory problem: each time he wakes up he loses his every memory of his life before."
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