For my future
I got up at 7 a.m. yesterday and ate breakfast. I watched two movie at the morning. I noticed the text from one of staff members while I was watching "Inside Head". He told me that he'd gotten burn at his fingers and the doctor said to him that he must keep his hands away from water at least a day. It meant he wasn't able to work at the restaurant a day. I was sorry for him and I thought I had to work instead of him even though I guessed I couldn't get money for the time because I'm a contract staff and the pay is same for a month. Anyway, I went to work and opened the door putting the key but it was very smoothly to open the door but I didn't expect it was already opened. I felt wired someone said hello to me so I'd gotten scared but actually the someone was my boss. I didn't expect he prepared meals instead of him. He thanked my decision. We finished preparation quickly and we went for a couple of coffee. We had a good time with talking about what I want to be in the future especially what I want to spend time for work. He motivated me so I thought I should learn English more and more for my future. Typically, time is limited! I have to spend time for my future! We worked again after the coffee time. It was good day!
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For my future
I got up at 7 a.m. yesterday and ate breakfast. I watched two movie movies at in the morning. I noticed the text from one of staff members while I was watching "Inside Head". He told me that he'd burned his fingers gotten burn at his fingers and the doctor said to him that he must keep his hands away from water at least a day. It meant he wasn't able to work at the restaurant a day. I was sorry for him and I thought I had to work instead of him even though I guessed I couldn't get money for the time because I'm a contract staff and the pay is same for a month. Anyway, I went to work and opened the door putting the key but it was very smoothly to open the door but I didn't expect it was already opened. I felt wired someone said hello to me so I'd gotten scared but actually the someone was my boss. I didn't expect he prepared meals instead of him [I don't understand what you mean]. He thanked my decision. We finished preparation quickly and we went for a couple of coffee. We had a good time with talking about what I want to be in the future especially what I want to spend time for work. He motivated me so I thought I should learn English more and more for my future. Typically, time is limited! I have to spend time for my future! We worked again after the coffee time. It was good day!0
For my future
I got up at 7 a.m. yesterday and ate breakfast. I watched two movies in the morning. I noticed a text from one of my coworkers while I was watching "Inside Head". He told me that he'd burnt his fingers and the doctor told him that he must keep his hands away from water for at least a day. It meant he wasn't able to work at the restaurant that day. I felt sorry for him and I thought I had to work instead of him even though I guessed I couldn't get money for the time because I'm a contract staff and the pay is the same for a month. Anyway, I went to work and opened the door with the key but it opened very smoothly and I didn't expect it to be already open (slight rewrite of this sentence). I felt wired, someone said hello to me so I got scared but actually that someone was my boss. I didn't expect he prepared meals instead of him.* He thanked me for coming in. We finished preparation quickly and we went for a cup of coffee. We had a good time with talking about what I want to be in the future especially what I want to do for work. He motivated me so I thought I should learn English more and more for my future. Typically, time is limited! I have to spend time for my future! We worked again after the coffee time. It was a good day!*maybe 'I didn't expect him to be preparing meals'
Great language use, some complicated structures here. Keep it up!
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「For my future
Yesterday, I got up at 7 a.m. and ate breakfast. I watched two movies in the morning. I noticed a text from one of the other staff members while I was watching "Inside Head." He told me that he'd gotten a burn on his fingers and the doctor said to him that he must keep his hands away from water for at least a day. It meant he wasn't able to work at the restaurant that day. I felt sorry for him and I thought I had to work in his place, even though I guessed I wouldn't be paid for the time because I'm a contracted staff member and the pay is the same for a month. Anyway, I left for work and went to open the door. I put the key in, but it opened very smoothly because I didn't realize that the door had already been unlocked. I felt shocked and scared when someone said hello to me, but it turned out to be my boss. I didn't expect he would prepare meals instead of my co-worker. He thanked my decision to come in to work. We finished preparation quickly and went for a couple of coffees afterward. We had a good time talking about what I want to be in the future. It was especially good to talk about what I want to be using my time working for. He motivated me, so I thought I should learn English more and more for my future. Typically, time is limited! I have to spend time for my future! We worked again after we finished our coffees. It was good day!」So, I was able to understand you, but you should focus on making your sentence structure better. Good job, though! 頑張ってください! ^_^
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