Has computer made life easier?
Hello. I wrote this text based on the exercise below:
"Some people say that computers have made life easier and more convenient. Other people say that computers have made life more complex and stressful. What is your opinion? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer."
If someone could help me with tips or corrections I would be grateful. Thank you.
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Has computer made life easier?
In the centuries before, when computers were not part of society's life, undoubtedly the activities were harder and less convenient than nowadays. On the computer does have everything in the single machine and this simplify a lot in day-day.
The first example is the facility to manage our bank count. It is not necessary faces a big queue in the bank to know account balance, make a transition or pay bills, for instance. The computer allows the convinience to make this activities at home independent of a schedule of bank and it avoid wasting time stressing.
Other example is the acessibility of shopping. On the computer we can buy everything without effort , just with one click and the products will arrive in our home. If it does not have time to go to the supermarket is possible order a meal or buying products anywhere . Moreover, when you buy on the computer is easier to know the best sales, because we can follow the prices on the all websites without locomotion to stores.
The third example is the possibility to talk with someone in another country or city. At the time when there was no computer, was really hard to keeping contact with someone distant, because it was expensive to make calls. So, the computer today give us a option to talk on the chats, use email or even make videocalls.
Some people do not agree with this and think that computers are stressful. These thoughts is because a lot of them use computer to work as well, but the problem is not about this technology and it is about the obligations which are made through the computer.Therefore, with or without computer some obligations is stressful anyway. So, for me definitely computers help our life to be easier and convenient.
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