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pls feedback me Hi everyone. it is soon the end of semester. Good luck with your last exams! Today I want to tell you "Cultural Differences between countries." I think that you already know about famous cultural differences. So I'll tell you about experiences I had. Last winter I went to Europe. I traveled five countries where England, France, German, Swiss and Italy. I experienced same cultural difference in same place in those countries. Guess where is it. It is restaurant! If you need help in korean restaurant, almost of you will raise your hand and call waiter. However, These actions are not allowed there. It is rude behavior to ignore the waiter. So I tried to eye contact with waiter whenever I need something. It is a very uncomfortable culture for me. Because when you need help in Korean restaurant, the action that push the bell brings waiters. How comfortable! One day, When I met a waiter's eye in Italy. The waiter suddenly winked at me! Not just wink, It looks like this wink. I was very embarrassed, so I just laughed.

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It is was a very uncomfortable culture for me because*** when you need help in a Korean restaurant, the (simple) act(ion) of that pushing the bell brings the waiters. How comfortable! convenient!****
One day, when I met made eye contact with a waiter's eye in Italy, The waiter***** he suddenly winked at me! It was not just a wink, it looked like this a flirty/flirtateous****** wink. I was very embarrassed, so I just laughed.

***"Because..." is not a complete sentence, so I attached this dependent clause to the previous sentence.

****A pillow is comfortable; a train station in front of your house is convenient.

*****"One day, when I..." is not a complete sentence, just a clause, so I connected it to the sentence that followed. 

******"I don't know what you mean by "this wink"; I can't see what you're doing when you're pointing out "this".

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pls feedback me Please provide me with feedback 

Hi everyone. it is It will soon be the end of semester. Good luck with your last final exams!
Today I want to tell you about "Cultural Differences between countries." I think that you already know about famous cultural differences. So I'll tell you about experiences I had.

Last winter I went to Europe. I traveled five countries: where England, France, Germany, Swiss Switzerland, and Italy. I experienced same some cultural differences in same some places in within those countries. Guess where is it  I did... It is At a restaurant!

If you need help in a kKorean restaurant, almost most of you will raise your hand and call the waiter. However, Tthese this actions are is not allowed there. It is rude behavior to ignore [Do you want to say "ignore" or call the waiter?] the waiter. So I tried to make eye contact with the waiter whenever I needed something.


It is a very uncomfortable culture for me. Bbecause when you need help in a Korean restaurant, the action that push the bell brings waiters. How comfortable!
One day, Wwhen I met a the waiter's eye in Italy. The waiter  the water suddenly winked at me! Not just wink, It looks like this wink. [What are you trying to say here? It is unclear right now] I was very embarrassed, so I just laughed.

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pls Please Give Me Feedback me*

Hi everyone. it is will soon be the end of semester. Good luck with on your last final exams!
Today I want to tell you about "Cultural Differences Between Countries."* I think that you already know about famous cultural differences, so I'll tell you about experiences I had.
Last winter, I went to Europe. I traveled to five countries: where England, France, German, Switzerland and Italy. I experienced the same cultural differences (as others?) in the same places in those countries.** Guess where is it was? It is was in a restaurant!
If you need help in a Korean restaurant, almost of you will raise your hand and call the waiter. However, these actions are were not allowed(?)** there. It is rude behavior to ignore the waiter. So I tried to make eye contact with the waiter whenever I needed something.

*Main words in titles are always capitalized in English composition.

**I believe you mean "It was not common there". "Not allowed" would mean "forbidden", and that's not the case in Europe.

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