Haru Ichiban
"Haru Ichiban" has come today.
"Haru" is spring and "Ichiban" is first in Japanese.
It's first warm strong wind around the end of winter.
When "Haru Ichiban" has come, we are able to know that spring is just around the corner.
Since I hate winter, I'm happy that the best season will come soon.
I love cherry blossome trees and comfortable wether.
However, for people who have hay fever, the worst season will come!
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Haru Ichiban
"Haru Ichiban" has come today."Haru" is spring and "Ichiban" is first in Japanese.
It's the first warm, strong wind around the end of winter.
Place commas if using more than one adjective.
When "Haru Ichiban" has come, we are able to know that spring is just around the corner.
'We are able to know' is technically correct, but just 'we know' on its own sounds more natural!
Also, nice use of 'just around the corner'! :^)
Since I hate winter, I'm happy that the best season will come soon.
This is correct, but perhaps 'I'm happy that my favourite season is coming' would sound a bit more natural too.
I love cherry blossoms trees and comfortable weather.
However, for people who have hay fever, the worst season will come!
Well done, keep up the good work! c:
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