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In most countries, multinational companies and their products are becoming more and more important.
This trend is seriously damaging our quality of life.
Nowadays in many different countries, multinational companies are becoming ever more important especially in the poorer countries.
It is also supported by many that this phenomenon could really attack and damage the quality of ours life.
First of all, we have to say that over the past 5 years the Western economy has decreased a lot due to the financial crisis.
And for this crisis, many states imposed more taxes with terrible consequences. In fact, several small and middle factory closed and as a result, numerous brands disappear.
However, as it is noticed by different economists the only companies that have not cut their production, actually they have increased it, are right the big companies.
How it's possible?
Firstly because they have a larger number of customers.
Secondly, and unfortunately, sometimes they don't recognize the worker's rights and pay them less than how it's fair.
And last but not least, because they corrupt many politicians of the poorer countries to repress the other new-born companies, and also because they save on te raw materials destroying the quality.
In fact, many times different controls showed that the products of this companies are under the standard of the average requirements but these powerful companies pay just a fine because all this episode are keep hidden.
So we must look and check the quality of products and give more importance to the quality instead of the price.
Because the most important things is our health.
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TASK:In most countries, multinational companies and their products are becoming more and more important.
This trend is seriously damaging our quality of life.
Nowadays in many different countries, multinational companies are becoming ever more important, especially in the poorer countries.
It is also supported by many that this phenomenon could really attack and damage the quality of our lives. >> OR "our quality of life."
First of all, we have to say that over the past 5 years the Western economy has decreased a lot due to the financial crisis.
As a result of/ In response to this crisis, many states imposed more taxes with terrible consequences. In fact, several small and medium-sized factories closed, and as a result, numerous brands disappeared.
However, it has been noted by different economists that the only companies that have not cut their production, (in fact they actually have increased it), are right the big companies.
How is it possible?
Firstly because they have a larger number of customers.
Secondly, and unfortunately, they sometimes don't recognize the worker's rights and pay them less than what is fair. >> OR "less than is fair."
And last but not least, because they corrupt many politicians of the poorer countries, getting them to repress the other new-born companies, and also saving on te raw materials, destroying the quality.
In fact, many times different controls showed that the products of these companies are below the standard of the average requirement. But these powerful companies just pay a fine, because all these episodes are kept hidden.
So we must look at and check the quality of products and give more importance to the quality instead of the price.
Because the most important thing is our health.
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