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My life story, Part 29 In late September 1981, we heard that the universities would be opened for students who had three or less semesters to finish school. We heard that our university’s location changed from college-bridge to Mirdamad street so we got ready to attend the classes, but we didn’t know that the dress code was changed also. The first day, we went to university wearing clothes like we would wear before the cultural reform, because wearing hijab was not mandatory in the society yet, But the university guards didn’t let us in and we had to wear hijab and the boys had to wear shirts with long sleeves and have a decent beard. The first day we couldn’t attend the class because we were unaware of the change in the dress code. The next day we wore hijab as they instructed, but they vigorously objected to our makeup and high-hills we were wearing. We promised that we would do as they want tomorrow, so they let us in. When we wanted to sit in our class, they told us boys and girls should sit separately; boys in the front rows and girls in the back rows. We were afraid to talk to boys and we felt like strangers sitting in a room. When we finally sat down on our chairs, The principal came in with a paper in his hands which had our names written on it. He said, anyone that I read his/her name must leave the class and they are not eligible for studying in the Islamic university.

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My life story, Part 29

In late September 1981, we heard that the universities would be reopened for students who had three or fewer semesters to finish school. We heard that our university’s location changed from college-bridge(?) to Mirdamad Street, so we got ready to attend the classes. What we didn’t know that the dress code had changed also.
The first day, we went to university wearing clothes like we would wear before the cultural reform, because wearing hijab was not yet mandatory. But the university guards didn’t let us in. We had to wear hijab and the boys had to wear shirts with long sleeves and have a decent beard. The first day we couldn’t attend the class because we were unaware of the change in the dress code.
The next day we wore hijab as they instructed, but they vigorously objected to our makeup and high-heels we were wearing. We promised that we would do as they want tomorrow, so they let us in. When we wanted to sit in our class, they told us boys and girls should sit separately; boys in the front rows and girls in the back rows. We were afraid to talk to boys and we felt like strangers sitting in a room.
When we finally sat down on our chairs, The principal came in with a paper in his hands which had our names written on it. He said, anyone whose name I read must leave the class because they are not eligible for studying in the Islamic university.


-Capitalize 'street' when you use it as part of a street name.

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You are most welcome, Parvin :) Those posts about your life are really enjoyable to read, and I hope my comment will push your entry and make it visible again on the notebook board, so that a native English speaker would notice it and correct it for you because it's a hard work for an English learner and deserves to be corrected.
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Hey dear Mumtaz I'm very happy to hear it. Thank you for your kindness.
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Parvin, I wish there was a way for me to help and correct your entry, but I'm like you; an English learner. I just wanted to say that I'm reading your entries and I like them, keep writing them and I wish you all the best.
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Dear iTalki friends. Please read my entry and send corrections for possible mistakes. I'd approtiate it very much Thank you in advance

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