A friend abroad
I’m so glad to hearing from you! Precisely this morning I’ve been thinking in you while I was having breakfast because of a funny photo that I found in my smartphone, taken on our last holidays in Scotland. We were surrounded by lambs and little sheep in a path close to a cliff . Do you remember these farmhouse where we stay and the big barn full of animals in the field?
I’m sure, but I never thought that you will end up working in Edinburgh and now, on the one hand, I’m a bit sad because you are far away, nevertheless on the other hand, I’m happy to read in this email, that you will get married next summer. That means that you’re quite well and happy too!
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A friend abroad
I’m so glad to be hearing from you! Precisely tThis morning I’ve been thinking in about you while I was having breakfast because of a funny photo that I found in on my smartphone, taken on during our last holiday in Scotland. We were surrounded by lambs and little sheep in on a path close to a cliff. Do you remember these farmhouse where we stayed and the big barn full of animals in the field?I’m sure, but I never thought that you will end up working in Edinburgh and now, on the one hand, I’m a bit sad because you're far away, nevertheless on the other hand, I’m happy to read in this email, that you will get married next summer. That means I'm sure that you’re quite definitely well and happy too!
Hi Lagat! Nice email / article. It sounds like you had a marvellous time with your friend in Scotland. Here are some suggestions for the future:
- We use on when we're on something, usually somewhere, with someone else - on the boat / on the roller-coaster / on the holiday
- Be careful with your tenses (where we stay and the big barn / where we stayed and the big barn)
- Proof read your sentences, to make sure you've used the best possible order of phrases - (That means that you're quite well and happy too / That means I'm sure that you're definitely well and happy too)
I hope these will help you in the future :)
Regards, Dave.
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A friend abroad
I’m so glad to hearing from you! Precisely Just this morning I was I’ve been thinking about in you while I was having breakfast because of a funny photo that I found in my Smartphone, taken on our last holidays in Scotland. We were surrounded by lambs and little sheep on a path close to a cliff . Do you remember these farmhouse where we stayed and the big barn in the field full of animals in the field?I’m sure, but I never thought that you would will end up working in Edinburgh and now, on the one hand, I’m a bit sad because you are far away, nevertheless on the other hand, I’m happy to read in this email, that you are getting will get married next summer. That means that you’re quite well and happy too!
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