Have you met my red balloon?
This world is very busy. I am surprised when I go far from my home, there's no body who would like to know my name.
I understood nothing about the world when I first time landed on this earth. Slowly, I begun to understand things; when people say "Ocha" it means they talk to me or about me..that is belong to me, that's my name. When people say "run" I know that it's stepping very fast. I have been long enough here since I landed, it felt so weird sometimes to feel that this world is belong to somebody.
The family who raised me and I were living upon the hill where there are only 15 houses. it's very peaceful and beautiful there.
Then one magical day, I saw a flying red ball in the air and got stuck on a tree. I climbed the tree to find out. As soon as I reached the thing that attached on it, the strong wind blew up almost made me falling and the red thing lifted me up and up.. I have seen so many things from above, and sometimes I landed in a place where the things took me.
There's only little boy or girl shouting when he sees my magical aeroplane.
"Balloon! Look!"
(To be continued )
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Have you met my red balloon?
This world is very busy. I am surprised when I go far from my home, there's no body who would like to know my name.I understood nothing about the world when I first time landed on this earth. Slowly, I begun to understand things; when people say "Ocha" it means they talk to me or about me..that is belong(s) to me, that's my name. When people say "run" I know that it's stepping (walking) very fast. I have been (here) long enough. here since I landed, it felt so (feels) weird sometimes to feel that this world is belong(s) to somebody.
The family who raised me and I were living upon the hill where there are only 15 houses. it's very peaceful and beautiful there.
Then one magical day, I saw a flying red ball in the air and got stuck on a tree. I climbed the tree to find out. As soon as I reached the thing that attached on it, the strong wind (that) blew up almost made me (fell off) falling and the red thing lifted me up and up.. I have seen so (saw) many things from above, and sometimes I landed in a place where the things took me.
There's only little boy(s) and or girl(s) shouting (shouted) when he sees (they saw) my magical aeroplane.
"Balloon! Look!"
(To be continued )
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Have you met my red balloon?
This world is very busy. I am surprised when I go far from my home, there's nobody who would like to know my name.I didn't understood anything about the world the first time landed on this earth. Slowly, I began to understand things; when people say "Ocha" it means they talk to me or about me..that it belongs to me, that's my name. When people say "run" I know that it's walking very fast. I have been here long enough, it feels so weird sometimes that this world belongs to somebody.
Together with the family who raised me, we lived upon a hill where there were only 15 houses. It's very peaceful and beautiful there.
Then one magical day, I saw a flying red ball in the air and it got stuck in a tree. I climbed the tree to investigate. As soon as I reached the thing it was attached to, the strong wind blew and almost made me fall and the red thing lifted me up higher and higher.. I have seen so many things from above, and sometimes I landed in a place where the things took me. (doesn't make sense)
There's a little boy or girl shouting when he sees my magical aeroplane.
"Balloon! Look!"
(To be continued )
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