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It was three o’clock in the morning when the phone rang… It was three o’clock in the morning when the phone rang. I was sleeping well, literally exhausted after a long hard working day. I had no idea what might have happened and this is really the first time my phone was ringing so early at night. But I was woken up so I answered the phone. Someone extremely exciting was spiking to me. ‘Hey, buddy! Glad to hear you!’ - said stranger. ‘You don’t believe me what has happened to me just now. I found her, my true love that I’ve been looking for all my life. She is sitting in front of me at the bar, smiling, talking to someone. What I’m going to do? Should I come and talk to her? Should I … But what I’m going to say?’. I though that I missed some conversation cause my eyes were sticking together. But without any shadow of a doubt I said ‘Just do it. Come to her, say your name and order a drink. Than if you like each other everything will happened by it self’. I didn’t remember what had happened next because I fell asleep. Next morning, I woke up as usual and didn’t remember anything about what had happened at night. A month later the door bell ring. I opened the door and saw my friend who just came back from the USA. But he was not alone, he was with a beautiful girlfriend. They both were smiling to me and seemed rely happy. He said ‘Thanks man, without that call and your motivation words I would never came up to this girl. And now we are going to marry and we came here to invite you to our wedding in few months. Thanks again.’ I was really happy for them but at the same time a little bit confused and unable to understood what he was talking about, what call, what motivation words? …

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It was three o’clock in the morning when the phone rang…

It was three o’clock in the morning when the phone rang. I was sleeping well, literally exhausted after a long hard working day. I had no idea what would happen as this was the first time my phone had rung so early in the morning, because I had been woke up I decided to answer it.

Someone extremely excited was speaking to me. ‘Hey, buddy! Glad to hear from you!’ said a stranger. ‘You won't believe what has just happened to me. I found her, my true love that I’ve been looking for all my life, she is sitting in front of me at the bar, smiling and talking to someone. What am I going to do? Should I go and talk to her? But what I’m going to say?’. I thought that I'd missed some of the conversation cause my eyes were sticking together. But without any shadow of a doubt I said ‘Just do it. Go over to her, say your name and order her a drink. Then if you like each other everything will happened by itself’. I don't remember what happened next because I fell asleep.

The next morning, I woke up as usual and didn’t remember anything about what had happened earlier that morning. A month later the door bell rung. I opened the door and saw my friend who just came back from the USA, but he was not alone, he was with a beautiful girlfriend. They both were smiling at me and seemed really happy. He said ‘Thanks man, without that call and your motivational words I would have never come up to this girl, We are going to get married and we came here to invite you to our wedding in few months. Thanks again.’ I was really happy for them but at the same time a little bit confused and couldn't understand what he was talking about, what call, what motivational words?...

 

This was a good start, just try to remember past and present tense. Keep it up! :) 

 

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It was three o’clock in the morning when the phone rang…

It was three o’clock in the morning when my phone rang. I was sleeping deeply/well, (literally) exhausted after a long hard working day. I had no idea what might have happened, as and it was this is really the first time /someone had called me so late early at night /my phone rang was ringing so late at night. But I was woken up eventually, so I answered the phone.

Someone on the other end of the line started to speak to me in an extremely excited manner. extremely exciting was spiking to me. ‘Hey, buddy! (I am so ) Glad you picked up my call! /Glad to hear you!’ said the stranger, ‘You won't don’t believe me what has happened to me just now. I found her, my true love -- the one that/who I’ve been looking for all my life! She is sitting (right) in front of me in a at the bar, smiling and talking to someone. What should I  I’m going to do? Should I come Go and talk to her? Or should I … But am I what I’m going to say to her?’

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( knew) thought that / I had missed some part of the conversation, because I was still pretty much half -asleep.my eyes were sticking together. But, without any shadow of a doubt, I had said to him:  ‘Just do it. Approach Come to her, introduce yourself to her say your name and then order a drink for her. Then, if both of you  you get to like each other, everything will happened by itself’. I didn’t know remember what had happened next, because I fell asleep soon after that.
 
The next morning, I woke up as usual, but I had forgotten/ and didn’t remember anything / about what had happened the at night before. A month later, the door bell rang ring. I opened the door and saw my friend who has just came back from the USA. But he was not alone-- he was with a beautiful girlfriend. Both of them were smiling (at me) and seemed really happy. He said to me, ‘Thanks man, without that conversation /call /and the motivation you gave me, with all the motivational words, I would never have the courage to go up to ( meaning to approach) came up to this girl. And now we are going to get married, and we came here to invite you to our wedding to be held in few months time. Thanks again.’ I was really happy for them but, at the same time, a little bit confused. I just could not understand unable to understood what he was talking about: what call?  What motivational words ? …

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