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Some people say cultural traditions in some countries are destroyed because they are used as money-making attractions aimed at tourists.Others think this is the only way to protect them.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
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There has long been a wide-ranging dicussion as cultural tradions.A number of people deem cultural tradions what are used for making money in tourism are destroyed; Another say it's protection them. I assent to the former persective.
On one hand,those who believe using cultural tradions to attract tourists is a protection method tend to state the following reasons.Firstly,it's beneficial to motivate enthusiasm of local people for protecting cultural traditions.Because the opinion holders think tourists'objectives are experiencing local cultures and customs, local people will must to keep their cultural traditions as original apppearance as they can how to keep attracting tourists.If original factors aren't been saved very well,tourists won't interest in the spot what maybe harm the local tourism income.Secondly,tourism will make cultural traditions grow in worldwide popularity what will attract more attenctions so as to protect that.If there isn't a widespread attention,it won't arouse more people's interests,so less and less people know it that maybe gradually disappeare in people' lives.
However,the argument made by opponents should not be neglected.They think cultural traditions are destroyed by tourism.The reasons are as follows.First of all,Great profits of tourism drive cultural traditions to be egregiously packed,so that lose their original oppearences.Due to many spots where have been changed for pandering to tourists are more and more commercialized and have hadn't the authentic cultural traditions.Such as Li Jiang China.In addtion,A massive cultural invasions destroy local cultural traditions.Because outsiders bring their cultures and something what local people haven't,so a lot of new and interesting things attract local people who gradually lose the sense of national identity.The cultural traditions in some countries are destroyed as this.
Obviously,it is hard for both sides to come to an agreement on this complicated issue.Personally, I prefer to agree the viewpoint---using cultural traditions to attract tourists for making money is destroying it.
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Some people say cultural traditions in some countries are destroyed because they are used as money-making attractions aimed at tourists.Others think this is the only way to protect them.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
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There has long been a wide-ranging discussion about cultural tradions. A number of people deem that cultural traditions that are used for making money in tourism are destroyed; others say it's protecting them. I assent to the former perspective.
On one hand, those who believe that using cultural traditions to attract tourists is a protection method tend to state the following reasons:
Firstly, it's beneficial to motivate the enthusiasm of local people for protecting cultural traditions. Because the opinion holders think tourists' objectives are experiencing local cultures and customs, local people will have to keep their cultural traditions as they originally appear to keep attracting tourists. If the original factors aren't saved very well, tourists won't be interested in that place, which would harm the local tourism income. Secondly, tourism will make cultural traditions grow in worldwide popularity which will attract more attention, so as to protect them. If there isn't widespread attention, it would not arouse people's interests, so fewer and fewer people would know about it. The traditions would gradually disappear in people' lives.
However, the argument made by opponents should not be neglected. They think cultural traditions are destroyed by tourism. The reasons are as follows:
First of all, great profits from tourism drive cultural traditions to be egregiously packed, so that they lose their original appearances. Due to this, many spots have been changed by pandering to tourists, becoming more and more commercialized. The tourists haven't seen the authentic cultural traditions. One example is Li Jiang, China.
In addition, massive cultural invasions destroy local cultural traditions. Because outsiders bring their cultures and things that local people don't have, a lot of new and interesting things attract local people, who gradually lose their sense of national identity. The cultural traditions in some countries are destroyed as this.
Obviously, it is hard for both sides to come to an agreement on this complicated issue. Personally, I prefer to agree with the viewpoint that using cultural traditions to attract tourists for making money is destroying them.
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Some people say that cultural traditions in some countries are being destroyed, because they are used as money-making attractions aimed at tourists. Others think that this is the only way to protect them.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
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There has long been a wide-ranging discussion concerning cultural traditions. Some people consider cultural traditions that are exploited for tourism, destructive. Others say the practice protects cultural traditions. I support the former perspective.
On the one hand, those who support the latter position, proffer the following arguments.
Firstly, the practice motivates local communities to protect their cultural traditions. Additionally, there is the incentive to keep the traditions pure and unadulterated, in order to continue attracting tourists. If the tourists sense that the practices have become corrupted, they will lose interest and tourism income will suffer.
Secondly, tourism will expose the traditions to a worldwide audience, which will attract still more tourists and thus there will be more motivation to protect the traditions. If there is no widespread interest, there is a possibility that the traditions will gradually disappear.
Now, the argument made by the opponents should not be neglected. They think that tourism destroys cultural traditions. The reasons are as follows.
Firstly, the commercialisation of the traditions sullies their authenticity. Changes made that pander to tourists, violate the integrity of the traditions. Examples, such as Li Jiang in China, show how an invasion of tourists destroys local cultural traditions. This is because outsiders introduce their own cultures, and local communities then lose a sense of national identity. The cultural traditions in some countries are destroyed like this.
Obviously, it is hard for both sides to reach consensus on this complicated issue. Personally, I agree with the viewpoint that using cultural traditions to attract tourists for profit, destroys those traditions.
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