I want to learn English Hi everyone, My name is Sebastian I´m from Colombia, I´m 26 years old, My problem is that my english is very bad, I´m studying Marketing in the university, And I need to learn

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I want to learn English Hi everyone, My name is Sebastian I´m from Colombia, I´m 26 years old, My problem is that my english is very bad, I´m studying Marketing in the university, And I need to learn english for I can end, I love soccer, My dream is travel around of Europa, know others cultures and other people, There are some things that like me I love road cycling, play soccer and swim, how about you help me to learn English? thanks for read me and I wait your help, thanks a lot.

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I want to learn English

Hi everyone,

My name is Sebastian, I'm from Colombia, and I´m 26 years old. My problem is that my English is very bad (really poor), particularly my spoken English. I´m studying Marketing in the at university, and I need to learn English for I can this end (for this reason/because of this).

I love soccer. My dream is to travel around of Europe, to get to know others cultures and other to meet interesting people, There are some things that like me I like many things/I have many interests, particularly sport. I love road cycling, playing soccer and swimming. How about you help me to learn English? Thanks for reading me my message (Thanks for reading about me) and, I await your help (I look forward to hearing from you).

Thanks a lot!

- Good text!

- Someone likes you, you like something. [I like sport. NEVER Sport likes me. ]

- Preposition + VERB + ing = Thanks for reading (except when using the infinitive - I want to travel around Europe. NOTE I look forward to hearing from you - NOT infinitive to (preposition) + hear (verb) + ing

- Use fewer commas and more full-stops/periods.

- Best of luck finding a language partner!

I want to learn English

Hi everyone, My name is Sebastian, I´m from Colombia and I´m 26 years old. My problem is that my English is very bad, I´m studying Marketing at a in the university, and I need to learn English. for I can end, I love soccer. My dream is to travel around of Europe, to know other cultures and other people, There are some things that like me I love/I enjoy road cycling, playing soccer and swimming, how about you help me to learn English? Thanks for reading me and I would like wait your help, thanks a lot.

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