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Which country would you like to live in?
I never know how to respond to this question. On one hand, I would to have more sunlight and warm days in the place I live, but since it's impossible I have to move somewhere else and enjoy the weather in a new place. When I imagine me walking along a brightly sunlit street while cheerful birds are singing in the trees, it makes me feel that I need to choose such a place and move there as soon as I can.On the other hand, I do not have any desire to live in the South of Russia, so I should think about alternatives. I really like South Korea, although I've never been there. I am in love with mountains and sea, I am excited by the local cuisine, I have tender feelings for Asians in general, that is why I think about that country first.
Besides, my future husband lives in this wonderful country and he is waiting for me impatiently, and I don't want to make him feel depressed anymore. So, I am going to pack my suitcase and book a ticket to Seoul right now.
Hello Ukachka,
Just a few small corrections but apart from that all of the text was understandable.
Best wishes
Bob
What country would you like to live in?
I never know how to respond to this question. On the one hand, I want it would there to be more sunlight and warm days in the place where I live, but since it's this is impossible where I currently am, I have to move somewhere and enjoy the weather in a new place. When I imagine me walking along the brightly sunlit street while cheerful birds are singing in the trees, it makes me feel like I need to choose such a place and move there as far away from here as I can. On the other hand, I do not have any desire to live in the South of Russia, so I should think about alternatives. I really like South Korea, although I've never been there. I am in love with mountains and sea, I am excited of for local cuisine, and I have tender feelings for Asians in general; that is why I think about that country first. Besides, my future husband lives in this wonderful country; and he is waiting for me impatiently, and I don't want to make him feel depressed anymore, so I am going to pack my suitcase and book a ticket to Seoul right now!Well, that escalated quickly... =)
Nicely written, Ukachka! Your English is strong. Any mistakes made were minor and can easily be corrected with more practice. Keep up the good work, and see you next time from Seoul =)
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