My happy days
Today I write a essay first time. I wish someone correct my sentence
Even though I could not speak english, Since I came to california, I have spent happy time with my kids. Actually I
worked in our country. But now I don't work and take care of my kids all day. I am happy because I can spend time with my kids. Sometimes I traveled famous places such as sanfrancisco, lake tahoe, national parks. But I think that I need to study.
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My happy days
Today I write a first time essay. I wish that someone corrects it.Even though I could not speak English, since I came to Ccalifornia, I have some spent happy time with my kids. Actually I worked in our country but now I don't work and take care of my kids all day. I am happy because I can spend time with my kids. Sometimes I travelled to famous places such as SanFransanfrancisco, Llake Ttahoe, national parks but I think that I need to study.
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My happy days
Today I write a essay for the first time. I wish someone could correct my sentences.Even though I can not speak English, since I came to California, I have spent happy had a great time with my kids. Actually I worked in our country. But now I don't work and take care of my kids all day. I am happy because I can spend time with my kids. Sometimes I travel to famous places such as San Francisco, Lake Tahoe, and national parks. But I think that I need to study.
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