how i met michael jordan
i remember when i was young in France, my father bring me to make my inscription in a basketball club then they give me my mumber card which allowed me to go to watch every match of the professional basket ball players for free so you have to know that in my town there is one famous team which get two sections: the amators (those who are not professionnal where i made the inscription) and the professionals. One day i came to watch some match and the speaker said to every body " there is a big gift to win at half-time so if anybody wants to participate just put your name in a piece of paper and put it in the urn and we will draw" .
the half-time comes, the speaker speak: " pay attention every body i 'm going to take five papers in this urn so those who heard their name please come here in the court, then each person will try to score a basket as much as it possible but you have five shoots so the best one of you will win." you know what i was one of them called to scrore a basket the incredible thing that's i was the winner so the speaker spoke again to say what the gift is : this person right here wins two places to go to watch michael jordan in Bercy." ( this is a mytical hall known for welcoming the important events sport ) so i went there that was just unbelievable so my dream come through i can not explain how was the feeling by words but the only thing i know that i will never forget it in the rest of my life. thank you for those who will read it Don't hesitate to correct me thank you
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Let me correct a correction on the last part:
One day I went to watch a match, and the speaker said to everybody, "There will be a prize-drawing at half-time, so if anybody wants to participate,just put your name on a piece of paper and put it in the bucket (can't quite get the word right but--- (urn is a container for dead people's ashes) and at half time we will draw a name"
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I cannot can not explain how was the feeling with by words, but the only thing i know that i will never forget it for in the rest of my life. Thank you for to those everyone who will read it this. Please, don't hesitate to correct me. Thank you
What a fun story, Kazam! I would love to read what happened at Bercy!
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How I Met Michael Jordan
I remember when I was a young boy in France. My father bring brought me to make my inscription in a basketball club then where they give gave me my a mumber membership card. This which allowed me to go to watch every professional basketball game match of the professional basket ball players for free.So, you have to must know, that in my town there is was one famous team which get had two sections parts: the amators amateurs (those who are not professionnal, and where for whom i made the inscription) and the professionals.
One day i came to watch some a match, and the speaker said to everybody, "There is a big gift to win at half-time, so if anybody wants you want to participate, just put your name in on a piece of paper and put it in the urn. Then and we will draw."
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At half-time, the speaker says, speak: "Pay attention everybody. i 'm going to take five papers in from this urn. If you hear your name, so those who heard their name please come here in to the court. then Each person will try to score a basket as much as it possible, but You have five shots shoots, so and the best one of you will win."
So i went there! That was just unbelievable! So my dreams come through came true.
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