thank u, italki,thank u, my new friends
i'm new to italki.i've made a lot of friends here just in one week.most of them are unbelievablly nice.we had great interaction.we talked about everything we're interested,including books,films,singers,language learnings.my new friends made me feel contented,my life colorful,my knowledge enriched,my English improved.last night,i talked to some wonderful friends and i was too excited to go to bed early.i reluctantly ended the call and hit the bed.i hope we can continue today.
all in all,i'd like to thank italki and my new friends.thank you all.
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thank u, italki,thank u, my new friends
i'm new to italki.i've made a lot of friends here just in one week.most of them are unbelievablly nice.I'm new to italki. I've made a lot of friends here in just one week. Most of them have been unbelievably nice.
Just keeping the same verb tense -- I have made lots of... Most of them have been
we had great interaction.we talked about everything we're interested,including books,films,singers,language learnings.
We have had great interaction. We have talked about our interests, including books, films, singers, and languages.
my new friends made me feel contented,my life colorful,my knowledge enriched,my English improved.
My new friends have made me feel happy, made my life more colorful, enriched my knowledge, and improved my English.
Again, sticking to the same verb tense. Also it's better to stay consistent when in the same sentence structure... verb + object.
last night,i talked to some wonderful friends and i was too excited to go to bed early.
Last night, I talked to some wonderful friends, and I was so excited I couldn't go to sleep.
i reluctantly ended the call and hit the bed.i hope we can continue today.
I reluctantly ended the call, and went to bed. I hope this will continue today.
all in all,i'd like to thank italki and my new friends.thank you all.
All in all, I'd like to thank italki and my new friends. Thank you all!
It's really great to hear to Lucy! Take care --
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I also agree~~
I am very happy to have met you~~~~~
Thankyou for our wonderful conversation~
Sorry I was busy today because I had to do some homework and prepare for exams, but I hope to talk to you soon~~~
Take care Lucy~~~~ ^^
I am very happy to have met you~~~~~
Thankyou for our wonderful conversation~
Sorry I was busy today because I had to do some homework and prepare for exams, but I hope to talk to you soon~~~
Take care Lucy~~~~ ^^
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thank u, italki,thank u, my new friends
i'm new to italki.i've made a lot of friends here just in one week.most of them are unbelievablly nice.we had great interaction.we talked about everything we're interested,including books,films,singers,language learnings.my new friends made me feel contented,my life colorful,my knowledge enriched,my English improved.last night,i talked to some wonderful friends and i was too excited to go to bed early.i reluctantly ended the call and hit the bed.i hope we can continue today.all in all,i'd like to thank italki and my new friends.thank you all.
I'm new to italki. I've made a lot of friends here in just one week. Most of them have been unbelievably nice.
We have had great interaction. We have talked about our interests, including books, films, singers, and languages.
My new friends have made me feel happy, made my life more colorful, enriched my knowledge, and improved my English.
Last night, I talked to some wonderful friends, and I was so excited I couldn't go to sleep.
I reluctantly ended the call, and went to bed. I hope this will continue today.
All in all, I'd like to thank italki and my new friends. Thank you all!
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别太兴奋啊,哈哈:)
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It's really nice to meet you too Lucy!
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