The autumn The autumn is my favourite season. Why do I love it? First of all, because of its colours. There are a lot of trees in my city. When the autumn comes the leaves on them become red, yellow

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Anastacia

The autumn The autumn is my favourite season. Why do I love it? First of all, because of its colours. There are a lot of trees in my city. When the autumn comes the leaves on them become red, yellow and brown. I think it's very beautiful. And I also like my shoes and my coat that I can wear only in the autumn. :) So, I always look forward to this time. And now I can clearly feel and see that the autumn has come to my city.

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The autumn

The autumn is my favourite season. Why do I love it? First of all, because of its colours. There are a lot of trees in my city.
When the autumn comes the leaves on them become red, yellow and brown. I think it's very beautiful. And I also like my shoes and my coat that I can wear only in the autumn. :)
So, I always look forward to this time. And now I can clearly feel and see that the autumn has come to my city.

Autumn There is no rule for articles, and Americans and the British use them differently. Learning them simply takes practice.

Autumn is my favorite (American: favorite; British: favourite) season. Why do I love it? First of all, I (the sentence needs a subject) love it because of its colors (American: colors; British: colours). When autumn comes, the leaves on the trees become red, yellow, (some put a comma after "and", but others don't) and brown. I think it's very beautiful. I also like my shoes and my coat that I can only wear in autumn.

I always look forward to this time, and now I can clearly feel and see that autumn has come to my city.

Это хорошо. Я понимал.

Most Americans would say "fall" instead of "autumn."

Also, I tried to correct your post in autumn colors.

The Autumn

The autumn season is my favourite season. or "Autumn is my favourite season" There is no "the" as there is only one autumn but there are four seasons and so you need "the". Why do I love it? First of all, It's because of its colours. There are a lot of many trees in my city.
When the autumn comes the leaves on them become turn into reds, yellows and brown. I think it'sVery beautiful indeed. And I also like my shoes and my coat that I can wear only in the autumn. :) Then I can also wear shoes and the coat I love that are appropriate for this time of the year. So, I always look forward to this time. And now Autumn is now at my city's doorstep. I can clearly feel and see and feel its presence. that the autumn has come to my city.

The autumn

Autumn is my favourite season. Why do I love it? First of all because of its colours. There are a lot of trees in my city.
When autumn* comes the leaves on them turn red, yellow and brown. I think it's very beautiful. And I also like my shoes and my coat that I can wear only in **Autumn. :)
So, I always look forward to this time. And now I can clearly feel and see that autumn has*** come to my city.

*or, when Fall falls ...

**Autumn, Spring, Summer, Winter, like Sun, Moon, ... can be capitalised. This is today rather old-fashioned, but still good English.

***or, that Autumn is come to my city. (literary English sometimes uses 'is' instead of 'have' here).

Very well written!

Anastacia, You're right, I don't need to buy clothes for 4 seasons but for 3 in actual. The temperature in Autumn and Spring are same , almost cool. I can wear summer clothes in these seasons but it's slightly cold sometimes especially in the evening. So we need fall to winter clothes and winter to spring clothes to fit this kind of weather. The summer in Vietnam has its own beauties and charms. But I'm sure that you would feel incredible hot if you are here. The temperature in summer here is higher than in your country. Summer is the time for pupils and students take a long holiday ( 1 month to 3 months ). It's also the time for some students who going to graduate to say goodbye friends, teachers, school . So that this season always goes along with their sweet memories. Flame trees and queen's flower are the most outstanding image when talk about summer because these trees are planted everywhere and most in school areas. Their deep red and violet colour in blooming makes a brilliant summer colour. Dawn and sunset are incredible beautiful in summer. You just can see colourful clouds in this season and rainbow as well.^^ I can't stop writing about it.

I love autumn for exactly same reasons!

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