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Diary in English ♡ On the 4th of Nov. I woke up at around 10 am this morning. Then I took a shower, got changed clothes, put on make up and did the laundry. I was relaxing at home until evening and went out to see fireworks of Guy Fawkes. My friends and I took a coach to the venue and arrived there an hour and a half before the fireworks start. We bought hot dogs and entered the venue. It was freezing but we had to wait for an hour and a half. I wore a winter coat, but I can't stand the cold air! An hour and a half later, finally the fireworks began. It was amazing and better than I expected. There were some kinds of fireworks that I've never seen before. I had thought that the Japanese fireworks is the best all over the world, but I was moved by the English fireworks and it could be better than Japanese one. After that we moved to harbor side and visited a cocktail bar. We enjoyed some cocktails and I loved the performance to make cocktail. Then we moved to another pub and enjoyed chatting until 2 am! I felt tired but it was good Saturday night.

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I woke up at around 10 am this morning. Then I took a shower, got changed clothes (you can say "got changed" or "changed clothes"), put on make up, and did the laundry. I was relaxing relaxed at home until the evening and then went out to see fireworks of for Guy Fawkes Day. My friends and I took a coach to the venue and arrived there an hour and a half before the fireworks started. We bought hot dogs and entered the venue. It was freezing but we had to wait for an hour and a half. I wore a winter coat, but I can't stand the cold air! An hour and a half later, finally the fireworks finally began. It was amazing and better than I expected. There were some kinds of fireworks that I've never seen before. I had thought that the Japanese fireworks is are the best all over in the world, but I was moved by the English fireworks and learned (or: realized, found out, etc.) it they could be better than the Japanese ones.

After that, we moved to the harbor side and visited a cocktail bar. We enjoyed some cocktails and I loved the performance to make cocktail. Then we moved to another pub and enjoyed chatting until 2 am! I felt tired but it was good Saturday night.
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Diary in English ♡ On the 4th of Nov.

I woke up at around 10 am this morning. Then I took a shower, got changed clotheschanged (my) clothes, put on make up and did the laundry. I was relaxing at home until evening and went out to see fireworks of Guy Fawkes. My friends and I took a coach to the venue and arrived there an hour and a half before the fireworks started. We bought hot dogs and entered the venue. It was freezing but we had to wait for an hour and a half. I wore a winter coat, but I can't stand the cold air! An hour and a half later, finally the fireworks began[a little more natural: "the fireworks finally began"]. It was amazing and better than I expected. There were some kinds of fireworks that I've never seen before. I had thought that the Japanese fireworks is were the best all over the world(the best in the world), but I was moved by the English fireworks and it could be better than Japanese one(might have even been better than Japanese ones [ones = fireworks, so it is the plural. In order to use "one" you would have to say something like, "The English fireworks show might have been better than a Japanese one" ; one = the show).

After that we moved to the harbor side and visited a cocktail bar. We enjoyed some cocktails and I loved the performance to make cocktail(cocktail making performance). Then we moved to another pub and enjoyed chatting until 2 am! I felt(was) tired but it was a good Saturday night.
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Thank you :)
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good job!

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