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Today I ate a hurried breadfast and went to take the subway .because of the rainny day , many people stood in line , and me have also...Suddenly a breakdown of the door ,I have to leave the line ,I'm very sad and afraid of being late, And last, I really late, and I sit down not long ,a colleague help him to send data to his client,the client is a very stupid and noisy woman ,I hate her ......I don't want .....
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Bad Move
Today I ate a hurried breakfast and went to take the subway. Because it was a of the rainy day, many people were stood in line, and me as well have also...Suddenly a breakdown of the door broke, I had to leave the line. I was very sad and afraid of being late. And last, I was really late. After sitting down for a short time, I helped a colleague I sit down not long ,a colleague help him to send data to his client. The client is a very stupid and noisy woman. I hate her ......I didn't want .....Note:
When you write a comma, don't put a space before it. Put it directly after the word.
Correct - I like apples, oranges, and pineapple.
Incorrect - I like apples ,oranges ,and pineapple.
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bad move
Today I ate a hurried breadfast breakfast and went to take the subway. Because of the rainny day , many people stood in line , and me have I did also...Suddenly a breakdown of the door broke, I have had to leave the line, I'm I was very sad and afraid of being late. And last, I was really late, and I sit was sitting down for not long when a colleague needed help him to send data to his client, the client is a very stupid and noisy woman, I hate her (very strong wording)......I don't didn't want to help.....Your narrative was understandable until the last sentence, it was jumbled once you described getting to work and your interaction with your coworker(colleague).
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