My short story Hi! My name is Diego and I was born on 26th September 1985. I am from Brazilian and grew up in the city Montes Claros until my 18 years old. After I moved with my family to Curvelo when

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Diego

My short story Hi! My name is Diego and I was born on 26th September 1985. I am from Brazilian and grew up in the city Montes Claros until my 18 years old. After I moved with my family to Curvelo when living my grandpa and grandmother. Here I studied System Analyst and today I am programmer and tutor at the University Unopar. I like to listen to music and play the acoustic guitar. My kind of the music favorite is Rock and Roll and Blues. I like to read books, watch series and movies. I want to learn English for my growing up the study and know new cultures, meet new peoples, can travel for the abroad or until same to live in another country, it's my dream. I want much to visit Canada, England, USA and Italy, I think these interesting countries. After I want to learn Spanish and Italian. It's my objective is become polyglot

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My short story

Hi! My name is Diego and I was born on 26th September 1985. I am from Brazilian and grew up in the city Montes Claros until my I was18 years old. After I moved with my family to Curvelo when living to live with my grandpa and grandmother. Here I studied System Analyst* and today I am a programmer and tutor at the University of Unopar. I like to listen to music and play the acoustic guitar. My favourite kind of the music favorite is Rock and Roll and Blues. I like to read books, watch TV series and movies. I want to learn English **for my growing up the study** and know new cultures, meet new peoples, so I can travel for the abroad or until same to live in another country, it's my dream. I want very*** much to visit Canada, England, USA and Italy, I think these interesting countries. After I want to learn Spanish and Italian. It's my objective is become polyglot

*I studied to be a System Analyst or I studied System Analysis

** I'm not sure what you are saying in this passage

*** It is strange, but native speakers would always say 'very much' here, and not just 'much'. You could just say 'I want to visit..'

Well written and good luck with your studies, Deigo!

My short story

Hi! My name is Diego and I was born on 26th September 1985. I am from Brazilian and grew up in the city Montes Claros until I wasmy 18 years old. After I moved with my family to Curvelo when living with my grandpa and grandmother. Here I studied to become a Systems Analyst and today I ama programmer and tutor at the University Unopar. I like to listen to music and play the acoustic guitar. My kind of the music favoritentypes of music are is Rock and Roll and Blues. I like to read books, watch series and movies. I want to learn English and for my growing up the study and know new cultures, meet new peoples, can travel for the abroad or until same (Not sure what you mean here) to live in another country, it's my dream. I want much to visit Canada, England, USA and Italy, I think these are interesting countries. After I want to learn Spanish and Italian. It's my objective is become polyglot

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