Already visited!!! yijing you wan le!!!

There was a man in one village.He had a wife and a son.This man proud of having many girl friends when he was young.
yi ge ren zhu zai yi ge nongcun zi li(村子里).ta you yi ge laobo , yi ge er zi.Zhe ge ren jiao ao, you le hen duo nu pen you. ta xiao de shi hou.这个人很自豪,因为他年轻的时候有很多女朋友(zhe ge ren hen zi hao, yin wei ta nian qing de shi hou you hen duo nv peng you.)
When son grown up ,want a girl friend for marriage.
er zi zhang da le jiao nu peng you, yao qu(娶)zuo lao bo.
He told his father that he want to visit eastern part of the village and look for a girl friend.
ta shuo ba bagen ta baba shuo(跟他爸爸说),"wo yao zai cun zi dong bu zhao yi ge(在村子东部找一个) nu peng you ".
Father said,"It is not possible!! when I was single, I have already visited this part and had a lot of girl friends.The girl you like may be your sister.According to our tradition same blood brother and sister can not marry."
Ba ba shuo,"Bu ke yi.wo dan shen de shou hou qu guo zhe ge di fang, zai na you guo hen duo nu peng you(偶很多单身的时候去过这个地方,在那有过很多女朋友).Ni xihuan de xiao jie nu hai(女孩) ken neng shi(是) ni de mei mei.Ge ge he mei mei bu ke yi jie hun.
when the wife heard these words was not happy but said nothing.
Lao po ting dao le jue de bu gao xing. Dan shi shen me duo bu shuo hua mei you shuo(没有说)

The next day, son wanted to visit northern part to look for a girl friend.Father told same as before. 
di er(第二) tian er zi yao qu bei bu zhao(北部找) nu peng you. ba ba shuo le(了)yi yang de hua.
Son already told to visit all four parts of the village and father said same word" impossible".
er zi yijing shuo yao qu cun zi de(村子的) dong, nan xi bei bu , ba ba de hua shi yiyang "bu ke yi".
At last, wife can not keep important words in heart and speak out," Carry on son! you can marry whoever the girl you want, as you have been already visted in my stormach(i.e womb) before your father marry me.!!!)
zui hou lao bo shuo chu lai xin li de hua."jia you!! er zi.

ni xihuan shen me ren ni neng ke yi jin hun yin wei ni yijing you guo wo de du zi limian ni de ba ba jin hun wo yi cheng!!!)ni ke yi gen ni xi huan de ren he nv hai jie hun, yin wei zai wo gen ni baba jie hun qian, ni jiu yi jing zai wo de du zi li le(你可以跟你喜欢的任何女孩结婚,因为在我跟你爸爸结婚前,你就已经在我的肚子里了)

I think your Chinese is getting better and better.  keep writing!  ^^