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Entry # 1 Today, the weather is perfect for relaxation so I spent most of my time sleeping. I woke up 6 am and took my breakfast. Mom and I had a little chit chat about the usual things. After that, I went back to my room and slept with my partner. He arrived home at 6 am since he spent the whole night playing video games with his friends at the internet cafe. He woke me up when he arrived (it's a habit he can't get rid of) and told me all the nice things a husband can tell his wife. Sometimes it bothers me since I don't like being disturbed when sleeping. But I realized that there's no valid reason to be sour in the morning, especially when he only has good intentions. Anyway, after all that, I went back to sleep and woke up 12 noon; I ate my lunch; and drank my iced coco at the terrace. It's such a calm day. The weather is still as beautiful as it was at 6 am. I think I'll go back to sleep again.

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Excellent writing. The only corrections needed are "woke up at 6 am" and "woke up at 12 noon".

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