Freezing Days (Correction please!)

Last month, we simply had too much snow in the Tokyo area. We seldom have such a heavy snowfall, so it not only gave us beautiful scenery and an unscheduled holiday, but also horrible traffic jams! Two of the three were very nice for me, but the last caused misery for everyone.

I personally think every car should have snow tires in winter, but in this area, there are still so many people driving their vehicles on “summer” tires. That lack of traction is why I saw many cars sitting in fields after they had, unfortunately, skidded off the road after they had tried to pass other vehicles on narrow country roads. On my way back from my office, there was even a huge truck stuck in the middle of the bypass because of the slope of the bridge. The truck maddeningly blocked both lanes, so everyone driving had to find another route.

As a result, for me, it took twice as long as my usual commute on an ordinary day to return home. And, just last week, we also had another snow. The countless flakes of it falling from the gray sky made me happy again. But this time, I hoped everyone would stay safely inside with friends or family, enjoying the scenery from the comfort of a window as it grew whiter and whiter, but of course, without thinking about the need to shovel the snow away from the front of the house later!

Hi Shoji. Good job! Whatever changes that I’ve made were merely done to allow your sentences to sound more natural to my native ears, for clarity, and to complete your thoughts. Apologies if I misinterpreted! I hope that this helps you. J. *P.S. Nice picture!

Freezing days -Correction please!