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three day weekend 上个周末我有三天放假。这是我公司的第一次给我们总统天没上班。星期五晚上我跟我老公在商店见面。我们想了要买新的手机。可是我们决定等下个月才买。我们在外面吃晚饭。星期六他上西班牙课的时候我打扫房子。他下课以后我们一起去看厨房的更新想法。在晚上我们去我父母的家。我全家都吃烤牛肉，烤鸡肉，很好玩了。星期日我跟我老公去商场买衣服。他买好了五件衬衫，我买好了六件衬衫。星期日晚上我们在家吃烘烤比萨。星期一早上我们跟他的妹妹和她的老公在餐馆吃早饭。我们很喜欢有三天没上班。

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three day weekend

上个周末我有三天的假期放假(1)。这是我的公司(2)的第一次给我们总统日假期天没上班(3)。星期五晚上我跟我老公在商店见面。我们想了要买新的手机。，可是我们最终决定等下个月才买(4)。我们在外面吃了晚饭(5)。星期六他上西班牙课的时候我打扫房子。他下课以后我们一起去看厨房的更新想法(6)。在晚上我们去了我父母的家。我们全家都吃了烤牛肉，烤鸡肉，很好玩了很开心。星期日我跟我老公去商场买衣服。，他买好了五件衬衫，我买好了六件衬衫(7)。星期日晚上我们在家吃烘烤比萨。星期一早上我们跟他老公的妹妹和她的老公妹夫在餐馆吃了早饭(8)。我们很喜欢有这三天没上班的假期。

(1)假期 is a noun。放假 is a verb。In detail, 放(v.)假(n.)。 三天的假期=three-day holiday。 If you still want to express in a verb, you can say 放了三天假。

(2)The emotion is slightly different between 我的公司 and 我公司。我公司 is usually what leaders call his company in a more official tone to the employees or public.

(3) A little trick in this modification. 总统日 is a holiday you don't have to go to work this time. While you told it was a short break before, you don't need to repeat 不上班 again. Just say 这是我的公司第一次给我们总统日假期 or 这是我们公司第一次放总统日的假 instead.

(4) It is better to show timeline and logic in this sentence since you have changed your mind and decided to but it next month. Better to use ，to connect this two sentences, because they are directly relative. 

(5) Be careful about 了. It shows that you have done this. See(7)as well. I added ，, but didn't add 了 in 星期日我跟我老公去商场买衣服。It's like "When we were buying clothes...(I don‘t know how to say, but something like 状态. You can use this trick to avoid too many了, if you really don't like it), he bought..., and I bought..."

(6) Sorry, I don't really understand this sentences. You watched a short video called 厨房的更新想法？or you were looking for some cookers to update your kitchen because of some new ideas?

(8) The husband of the younger sister is called 妹夫. 妹夫=妹妹的丈夫

If you have some more questions, please feel free to contact me. Chinese is my native language. Hope I can help you.

I am an English learner and want to speak English fluently. Maybe we can make progress together. ☺️

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three day weekend

上个周末我有三天放假放了三天假。，这是我的公司的第一次在總統日讓我們放假给我们总统天没上班。星期五晚上，我跟我老公約在商店见面。，我们本來想了要买新的手机。，後來可是我们决定等下个月才再买。我们在外面吃晚饭。星期六他上西班牙课的时候，我打扫房子。他下课以后我们一起去看厨房的更新想法。在晚上我们去我父母的家。我全家都一起吃烤牛肉，、烤鸡肉，很好玩了。星期日我跟我老公去商场买衣服。，他买好了五件衬衫，我买好了六件衬衫。星期日晚上我们在家吃烘烤比萨。星期一早上我们跟老公的妹妹及妹夫他的妹妹和她的老公在餐馆吃早饭。我们很喜欢有像這樣的三天假期没上班。

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上个周末我有三天放假假期。这是我的公司的第一次给我们在总统天没上班放假。星期五晚上我跟我老公在商店见面。我们想了要买新的手机。可是后来我们决定等下个月才再买。我们在外面吃了晚饭。星期六他上西班牙课的时候我打扫房子。他下课以后我们一起去看《厨房的更新想法》。在晚上我们去了我父母的家。我全家都一起吃烤牛肉，烤鸡肉，玩的很好玩了开心。星期日我跟我老公去商场买衣服。他买好了五件衬衫，我买好了六件衬衫。星期日晚上我们在家吃烘烤比萨。星期一早上我们跟他的妹妹妹夫和她的老公在餐馆吃了早饭。我们很喜欢有这样三天没上班的假期。

花了好久给你批改的，请采纳。不过你写的已经很好了，特别的棒，继续加油哦[emoji]，我是中国人，你有不懂的地方可以随时问我，免费的哦，我最近也在学习英语，希望可以和你一起学习。

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