The story of a piano tuner
The piano tuner came to my house to tune the piano in three years.
He has a cheerful. He tuned some sounds nicely and adviced me to play from the lowest keyboard to the highest keyboard as much as I can.
After he left my home, that reminded me the novel "The forest of Sheep and Steel" which is my favorite.
This novel is made into a movie and is released on this June.
I can't wait to see it.
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The story of a piano tuner
The piano tuner came to my house to tune the piano I've had for three years. * (I wasn't sure exactly sure what you meant, but this was my best guess of what you wanted to say.)*
He has a cheerful personality. He tuned some sounds nicely and advised me to play from the lowest keys to the highest keys as much as I could. *(The reason it needs to be "could" is because you are talking about the past. "He told me to play as much as I could".)*
After he left my home, it reminded me of the novel "The Forest of Sheep and Steel," which is my favorite.
This novel is being made into a movie and will be released this June. *(OR This novel is being made into a movie and is going to be released in June.")*
I can't wait to see it.
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