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Help to correct my text about pharmaceutical The internshop was made in the Mestrinier Drugstore, between 03/13/2018 to 04/09/2018,with a workload about 120 hours, Manager over Dr. Osmar Mestriner CRF: 55.859, Pharmaceutical owner of the place who stayed monitoring me all of time one, he supervised me, he gave me tips, he teached me and he repaid my doubts about medicine and the pharmaceutical warning attention, issues about the medicines It've teached about write prescriptions and how use ones and yours injectable applications what it made me embody my knowledge I got in my university. The goal on this internship was add the knowledge I had at college with the day by day in a Drugstore, It’ve been teached and evaluate right way per a pharmaceutical and if makes me understand better about the importance of the pharmaceutical it be present in the moment of the delivery and attention pharmaceutical. Anyway it offer safe and competence on the works doing to the user, It've ensured a pharmaceutical correct and effective. I developed tasks like: blood glucose test, pressure calibration, application of injectables, medicine Delivery, It always with the accompaniment of the pharmaceutical owner.

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Help to correct my text about pharmaceutical

The internshop was created in the Mestrinier Drugstore, between 03/13/2018 to 04/09/2018. It had a workload of about 120 hours, and the Manager was Dr. Osmar Mestriner CRF: 55.859. (sorry, but I do not understand this last sentence)

The owner of the place stayed and monitored me all the time, he supervised me, he gave me tips, taught me and rid my doubts about medicine and the dangers of pharmaceuticals. He also furthered my knowledge  about writing prescriptions; it made me endeepen my knowledge that I got from my university. The goal of this internship was to add to the knowledge I received in university with the day to day work schedule in a pharmacy. It’ve(this is not a word) been teached and evaluate right way per a pharmaceutical and It made me better understand the importance of the pharmaceutical industry because it is heavily present in our lives. In addition, its effects offer safe and competent results on the works doing to the user,  but pharmacists make sure the results are correct and effective. I learned new tasks such as: how to do a blood glucose test, pressure calibration, give injections, and deliver medicine. It was always with the accompaniment of the pharmaceutical owner as well.

good job..... the pharmaceutical industry is a hard topic to write about. The paragraph was confusing to read, but I tried to correct it as much as possible. Good luck with your studies and learning English!

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