please help me with this letter. I want to send it to my friends to encourage her in applying for the job!

Hi Sasha:

I've seen an job ads online and I think it really fits you well.  Have you ever thought about working as an art critic?  I want to encourage you to apply for the job it at The National Times Newspaper.

The newspaper This position offers the position with $35,000 and a 28-day holiday per year with a free company car, full health insurance and pension scheme. I urge you to consider the position it and have a try.

Would you Please consider it.   for a while and then Call and let me know to tell me your opinion?

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please help me with this letter sending to my friends to encourage her applying for the job!

hi Sasha:
I've seen some job ads on line and I think it really fits you well.Have you ever thought about working as an art critic?I want to encourage you to apply for the job at The National Times Newspaper.
The newspaper offers the position with $35,000 and a 28-day holiday per year,a free company car,full health insurance,pension scheme .I urge you to consider the position and have a try.
Would you consider it for a while and then call to tell me your opinion?
Good luck