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DailyTalki #6 and #7 - About ride a bicycle and public libraries [First of all, I would like to thank the people helping me to improve my write, It's most important to me to learn english] I like to read. I am always reading. E-books, newspaper, articles on the internet, all of them. In my city, there is a library with many books on different subjects. It's hard to choose which to read. I study Digital Marketing, so I frequently take out books on the subject. But I'll read any how-to books, for example, Medical Science, Engineer, Advertising, Management, and the list goes on. Not to mention the wifi. Recently they added two computers to research, but nobody's used them. It is a little library, but it is a special place for me to study. To travel around, I use my bicycle. Even though it seems cool to ride, I don't like it, because it is very uncomfortable. I walk about 12, 13 km to get there. Along the way, I like to look at the landscape, the fauna and flora, and nature in general. I look at how the social system works and the people's behavior. Sometimes these people only want to live their life, without compulsory hours in a company or obeying meaningless orders. Finally, the message I leave is: "You can search your own happiness, depends only on you"

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DailyTalki #6 and #7 - About ride a bicycle and public libraries

I just tweaked a few words, sentence structures and a couple of tenses.

I like to read. I read always (or you could say "I am always reading".) E-books, newspaper, articles on the internet, all of them.

In my city, there is a library with many books on different subjects. It's hard to choose which to read. I study Digital Marketing, so I frequently take out books on the subject.

But I'll read any how-to books, for example, Medical Science, Engineer, Advertising, Management, and the list goes on. Not to mention the wifi. Recently they added two computers to research, but nobody's used them. It is a little library, but it is a special place for me to study.

For to take a road or maybe you could say "To travel around  I use my bicycle.

Even though it seems cool to ride, I don't like it, because it is very uncomfortable. I walk about 12, or13 km to get there.

Along the way I like to look at the landscape, the fauna and flora, and nature in general. I look at how the social system works and the people's behavior. Sometimes these people only want to live their life, without compulsory hours in a company or obeying meaningless orders.

Finally, the message I leave is: "You can search for your own happiness, but it depends only on you"
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DailyTalki #6 and #7 - About ride a bicycle and public libraries

[First of all, I would like to thank the people helping me to improve my write, It's most important to me to learn english]

I like to read. I read always. E-books, newspaper, articles on the internet, everything.


In my city, there is a library with many books on different subjects. It's hard to choose which ones to read. I study Digital Marketing, so frequently I take a book about Marketing.


The library doesn’t have any books on some topics:  for example Medical Science, Engineer, Advertising, Management, etc. But now there is wifi. Recently they installed two computers for research, but nobody has used them yet. It is a little library, but it is a special place for me to study.

For transport I could I use my bicycle.
But although it’s cool to ride, I don't like it, because it is very uncomfortable. Instead I walk about 12, 13 km to get there.

Along the way, I like to look at the landscape, the fauna, and flora, the nature in a general way. I also observe how the social system works and people's behavior. Sometimes these people only want to live a life, without spending hours in a company or obeying mindless orders.

Finally, the message I leave is: "You can search your own happiness, it depends only on you"

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