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A convenient packing car I am a manager for cosmetic company. My company doesn't have enough budget to buy many equipment, so I always think about how to use idle goods to make some useful tools.. Look at picture~ It's the one of them! This car can help operators very much!! They need to bend over before,when they are packing. But now, they can stand straight to pack every thing! It has two kind of angles, they can select it according their height or the box height. And, when they finish the box, they can push the car where they want to discharge. I usually proud of my brain when I solve the problems for my operators.

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A convenient packing car

I am a manager for a cosmetic company.
My company doesn't have enough money to buy much equipment, so I always think about how to use idle goods to make some useful tools..

Look at the picture~ It shows a useful tool!
This car can help operators very much!!
They needed to bend over before, when they were packing.
But now, they can stand straight to pack everything!
It has two kind of angles, they can select it according their height or the box height.
And, when they finish the box, they can push the car where they want to unload it.
I usually proud of my brain when I solve the problems for my operators.

Very well written! And a clever and useful invention!

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A Convenient Packing Car 

I am a manager at a cosmetic company.
My company doesn't have enough budget to buy all the equipment, so I always need to think about how to use idle goods to make some useful tools.

Look at picture~ It's the one of them!
This car can help operators very much!!
They need to bend over before when they are packing.
But now, they can pack every thing while standing!
It has two kind of angles, they can select it according their height or the box height.
And, when they finish the box, they can push the car where they want to discharge.

I usually proud of myself when I solve the problems for my operators.


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