My new iPhone
This morning I lost my new iPhone which was a birthday gift from my parents last week. I thought it should be left on the bus. I made a phone call to my iPhone when I arrived office, but no one answer. And I made a next phone call to the bus terminal to ask the bus driver for my phone's whereabouts.The driver told me there was nothing at all on his bus.
I told the whole situation to my colleague, and she comforted me not to worry about my phone, which will be back soon.
5 minutes later, my mom called me that my phone was found by a neighbor, who made a phone call to my dad that the phone dropped in the elevator.
God bless! What a good guy he is.I am very thankful for his honesty.
Dear all,
I need your corrections & suggestions.
Thanks a lot.
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My new iPhone
This morning I lost my new iPhone which was a birthday gift from my parents last week. I thought it should be must have been left on the bus. I made a phone call to called my iPhone when I arrived at the office, but no one answered. And I also made a next phone call to called the bus terminal to ask the bus driver for my phone's whereabouts.The driver told me there was nothing at all on his bus.I told the whole situation to my colleague, and she comforted told me not to worry about my phone, which will be back soon.
5 minutes later, my mom called and told me that my phone was had been found by a neighbor, who made a phone call to called my dad to tell him that the phone had been dropped in the elevator.
God bless! What a good guy he is.I am very thankful for his honesty.
Dear all,
I need your corrections & suggestions.
Thanks a lot.
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