THE DRESS
Yesterday I tried my first wedding dress, but no... I'm not getting married. The dress is for my friend. She is going to marry in one month . Before that we (her friends) are going to made a big party. The dress is for her party, we going to dress up with a wedding dress of 90's. The dress has a lot of fabric, brilliant, crystals and perls. I bough them in a Second-Hand Shop and it was very cheap and it's very beatiful. But you can't tell her because it's a surprise!
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THE DRESS
Yesterday I tried on my first wedding dress, but no... I'm not getting married. The dress is for my friend. She is going to get married marry in one month (1) . Before that we (her friends) are going to throw her (2) made a big party. The dress is for her party, we are going to dress up with a wedding dress of 90's. The dress has a lot of fabric, brilliant, crystals and pearls. I bought them in a Second-Hand Shop and it was very cheap and it's very beautiful. But you can't tell her because it's a surprise!1- what you wrote is fine but VERY formal. People don't usually speak like that. We say .. "She is getting married".
2- We say "throw her a party" Dar una fiesta o decimos.. Have a big party = Hacer una fiesta.
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THE DRESS
Yesterday I tried my first wedding dress, but no... I'm not getting married. The dress is for my friend. She is getting married going to marry in one month. Before that, we (her friends) are going to have made a big party. The dress is for her party, we are going to dress her up in with a wedding dress from the of 90's. The dress has a lot of fabric, brilliant crystals and pearls. I bought them in a Second-Hand Shop and it was very cheap and it's very beautiful. But you can't tell her because it's a surprise!Nice Rakel. Just a handful of small mistakes. If you need more help with your English, just look me up.
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THE DRESS
Yesterday I tried on my first wedding dress, but no... I'm not getting married. The dress is for my friend. She is going to marry in one month . Before that we (her friends) are going to made a big party. The dress is for her party, we are going to dress up with a wedding dress of 90's. The dress has a lot of fabric, brilliants, crystals and perls. I bough them in a Second-Hand Shop and it was very cheap and it's very beatiful. But you can't (you souldn't tell her or don't tell her) tell her because it's a surprise!Vuoi progredire più velocemente?
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